Well done for your first zoids fic... i admit im interested to see what happens next

Unusual, but not bad.

A few pieces of criticism for you: Firstly, Leena focuses on using heavy-weapons zoids, and despite its inherent power, the Gemini just doesn't seem to be the sort of zoid Leena would warm to, (e.g. she lacks skill in the speed, manoeuvrability, close combat and accurate sniping fields and only demonstrates true aptitude in saturaton bombardments.

Secondly, Leena has a particularly short fuse when someone gets on her nerves (remember incidents with her and Bit that have involved such things as Bit raiding the fridge, etc.)

Thirdly, I doubt Bit would leave the Blitz team at that point in time, given as not only was he still masterng the Liger Zero (and I hate to tell you this but the Liger's sheer potential was responsible for most of the Blitz Team victories, not Bit's skill as such) but also Doc. Toros would have stopped him leaving until he had paid for the conversion armour units in full (and preferably also for his own transport with the capacity for a modification deck).

Anyhow, now that I've stopped finding fault with your fic so far I have a suggestion for you, this being that you modify your settings to allow people to review without logging in first, otherwise you may not get quite so many reviews, which would be a shame, because you show promise of becoming a decent writer.

Anyhow, MP signing off.