I love it I love it I love it!

Almost Poetic! Thanks for sharing your work.

Poor Harry :(

SUch a beautiful story, makes me really sad.

Great, great...FANTASTIC!

I totally love it, your writing is really good. i could feel the emotion there is alot of sad feeling but it felt good. I discovered that writing is sometime better when u are actually feeling what u are writing. I wonder do you plan on continuing this story...'cause i would love to see a continuation to it
Anyway i really liked your story.
p.s. forgive my english i'm french canadian so... well anyway ;¬)

I didn't really understand Tonk's to well. Im pro Honks, but I don't see her being slutty or any thing like that. Good grammar and description though, even if I don't like the premise. It is undeniably a good ficlet. If you get the chance, take a look at some of my stuff, especially HP and the Half blood pimp. Im pretty proud of how it is coming out. Your story has been favorited, as a representation of a properly performed "bad Tonks" fic.

so good!

good

*Sigh* poor Harry...I'd never love him because of someone else *giggles*. Good job on this, I love one-shots :-).

love it!

One shot, ONE SHOT! How could you do that to us start out like that and not finish.

interesting

Excellent! And to say I would be disappointed if there wasn't at least one more chapter would be an understatement.

Excellent work. I wouldn't mind a sequal.

Awesome cliff-hanger there!Keep writing!