I know it's been a long time since you wrote this fic, so I hope you're still reading reviews. I've been reading and enjoying the combination of angst and adventure. Your Severus is very believable and even Bella is sympathetic, to some degree. Great work.

its amazing that you can make us understand and really like the bella in this story even though she loves doing horible stuff you can't help really liking her, she has a childlike innocence in that she doesn't think normally or understand right from wrong (i wasn't saying she was innocent i just meant in the way her mind works) this story is amazing i look forward to reading more :)

brilliant story, i think you meant 'angel' though not 'angle', angle means where two straight lines meet, it is really confusing between the two, i used to spell it that way only for a little bit but it is confusing, its a really great fic i just thought you would want to know!

see my review for path of glitterung darkness. e

why didn't lily damn well do anything she knew about it and could have stopped it, working for the minestry and everything, it's really a great story by the way i'm really enjoying it, could you add a little more of the marauders it would be really interesting to see their reaction to the way he is now, cold and watnot?
Sorry i havn't reviewed more i wanted to read more of the story :)

Well written tale.

I like this Tabitha person, she promises future entertainment.

Angst makes me so happy. It's really weird to be honest. Maybe a little too many flash backs, but that's life. Whatever makes you happy.

Well that was lovely and ironic.

While I know it's necessary, the whole constantly missing Peter is driving me nuts. SO CLOSE!

Unsurprising but still sad.

She still doesn't really understand why he worries so much about his grades.

I am reminded of the part of the Bible when Herod wanted to kill Jesus so he just went after all the babies three and under. These maniacs when they feel threatened...sheesh.

I do like Bella, I was skeptical at first but she's just so helplessly sweet.

Evans said "seized to amaze me" which makes no sense, ought to be ceased to amaze me, which I know is a bit off as far as editing time is concerned but I like nit-picking. There are a few other typos too. And isn't a basilisk born from a frog hatching a chicken egg? Couldn't V. do it himself?