 Farquharine 2009-06-20 . chapter 15I know it's been a long time since you wrote this fic, so I hope you're still reading reviews. I've been reading and enjoying the combination of angst and adventure. Your Severus is very believable and even Bella is sympathetic, to some degree. Great work. |
 suzy 2008-01-08 . chapter 46 its amazing that you can make us understand and really like the bella in this story even though she loves doing horible stuff you can't help really liking her, she has a childlike innocence in that she doesn't think normally or understand right from wrong (i wasn't saying she was innocent i just meant in the way her mind works) this story is amazing i look forward to reading more :) |
 suzy 2008-01-08 . chapter 36 brilliant story, i think you meant 'angel' though not 'angle', angle means where two straight lines meet, it is really confusing between the two, i used to spell it that way only for a little bit but it is confusing, its a really great fic i just thought you would want to know! |
 powere 2008-01-07 . chapter 1see my review for path of glitterung darkness. e |
 Suzy 2008-01-06 . chapter 14 why didn't lily damn well do anything she knew about it and could have stopped it, working for the minestry and everything, it's really a great story by the way i'm really enjoying it, could you add a little more of the marauders it would be really interesting to see their reaction to the way he is now, cold and watnot?
Sorry i havn't reviewed more i wanted to read more of the story :) |
 Silverthreads 2007-07-13 . chapter 55Well written tale. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-11 . chapter 55I like this Tabitha person, she promises future entertainment. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-11 . chapter 45Angst makes me so happy. It's really weird to be honest. Maybe a little too many flash backs, but that's life. Whatever makes you happy. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-11 . chapter 38Well that was lovely and ironic. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-11 . chapter 37While I know it's necessary, the whole constantly missing Peter is driving me nuts. SO CLOSE! |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-11 . chapter 36Unsurprising but still sad. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-11 . chapter 34She still doesn't really understand why he worries so much about his grades. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-09 . chapter 20I am reminded of the part of the Bible when Herod wanted to kill Jesus so he just went after all the babies three and under. These maniacs when they feel threatened...sheesh. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-08 . chapter 15I do like Bella, I was skeptical at first but she's just so helplessly sweet. |
 NoxSomnium 2007-02-08 . chapter 8Evans said "seized to amaze me" which makes no sense, ought to be ceased to amaze me, which I know is a bit off as far as editing time is concerned but I like nit-picking. There are a few other typos too. And isn't a basilisk born from a frog hatching a chicken egg? Couldn't V. do it himself? |