I haven't watched Gundam Wing closely enough to be able to tell whether the relations between Lady Une and Mariemaia fit with this story. But it's still an amazing fanfic! The way you portrayed both Lady Une and Mariemaia made my heart soften, since from what I've read on them both, they were portrayed as cruel, cold-hearted and ruthless. I've never read a story in which they were kind and sweet. You make them sound like people you'd thank the Lord for bringing into this world. Again, wonderful work.

~Carnation

;_; *Cries* Oh my God, so cute and touching...

aww gosh thats cute. poor mariemaia though... ah well great story!

Excellent work! You describe Lady Une perfectly and Mariemaia is just darling... I looked at your profile and I'd like to tell you that I love Treize and Une too. I even cosplay the good Une occasionaly... Cute pic! It's nice to meet grown-ups who like Gundam Wing...

Wow. I haven't seen any fics about Mariemaya and Lady Une. But you did a great job with this one. I really like the way Mariemaya was portrayed. Keep up the good work!

Fantastic story you have going there. I think you did a good job of turning Lady Une from the leader of the Preventers into a mother, but at the same time keeping her as commander/colonel of the Preventers.

Couple of things: 1)Dorothy is Mariemaia’s first cousin once removed not niece. They’re parents, Duke Dermail and his sister were siblings. Shows you how ignorant he is. 2)Actually, Treize is responsible for her split personality. How or why we don’t know. Though I suppose you already know this. 3) It's Mariemaia, not MarieMaia.

Imagine what would’ve happened if Heero showed up at the school or had taken Mariemaia to the school. That would've been something.

Keep up the good work.