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Rel
2006-08-18 . chapter 19
the story is amazing! please continue soon!
anon
2006-01-25 . chapter 18
Omigosh! You must update! I really like this story!
Blue-Inked Frost
2006-01-23 . chapter 18
Oh, excellent! I really like the explanation for Noin's counting of days. In a way it's a rationalisation to make her look less obsessive, but it fits so well with the characters even so. I also like that you made Noin so harsh on Lady Une; I'm impressed at how brutally you were able to write that considering that you like the character. It also looks like the plot is progressing towards a conclusion; you manage to get the plot points across while keeping it entertaining. This is very good.
L.A.UNE
2005-12-01 . chapter 17
yeah you updated. poor you it must have been awful without internet. i hope you update this soon. and i also hope it will end hapily for treize and une in the end.
Etherealdestiny
2005-11-27 . chapter 17
Man I would beat Zechs to a bloody pulp(no matter how hot he is!) if I were Treize! How dare he try to make her forget him when she loves him! *beats Zechs*
Blue-Inked Frost
2005-11-27 . chapter 16
This is a really interesting fic. At some point I feel you took a sharp turn off AU road into OOC city, particularly with villainous!Zechs and victimised!Une, but the plot is fascinating and the writing style is good. The little bit of Heero/Relena in one of the previous chapters ("he clearly felt for her") felt somewhat shoehorned in--the 'ship might be a rather lovely piece of canon, but one doesn't need to decorate it with randomly dropped anvils. Your Relena/Dorothy relationship felt far more natural.

I don't know where you're going with the plot, and the historical subplot and the "Diary of a Madman" both seem to be leading down some very interesting roots. I'm looking forward to reading more. :)
Etherealdestiny
2005-11-25 . chapter 15
Omg... My poor Zechs... He is so messed up! *hugs*
Kiki
2005-10-24 . chapter 11
I love this story! I love your work! My favorite story that you wrote has to be 'Fragile Rose' followed closely by 'Dueling Hearts' You also wrote one about WWII with Une as a Nazi and Treize as a American Spy, I never finished reading it, but I enjoyed it also! Keep updating!
kiki
2005-10-23 . chapter 12
YOU MEAN PERSON! Leaving me hanging ah! Update, please! I must say this story has me hooked!
LadyAnduril
2005-10-21 . chapter 12
Yay you updated! I'm so happy! ^_^ I think the last two chapters kind of overlap or something...but...I'm still happy. lol ^^;

Thank you so much for writing again...since Lady Une and Treize's relationship isn't given much screen time, most of my perception of it comes from your writing. And since they are my favorite anime couple, your writing means so much.

/end gushing fangirl rant

bye ^^;
LadyAnduril
2005-10-14 . chapter 9
no i wouldn't have started reading it if I knew it wasn't finished T.T I love your work...I was so glad to see that you've started writing again. Don't stop! There aren't many good Une writers out there anymore. Thanks for all the great writing
Etherealdestiny
2005-08-15 . chapter 9
Aww, poor girl! DAMN HER UNLCE! HE IS A BASTARD!!
L.A.UNE
2005-08-10 . chapter 8
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write another chapter for this story.
L.A.UNE
2005-06-04 . chapter 2
This is a very interesting look on the relationship of Trieze and Une. Please please update this story. I hope it ends happy between Trieze and Une.
L.A.Une
2005-03-18 . chapter 8
Great story. Hope you update soon. One of the best fics ive read. Although i hope Une and Trieze work it out and get together. There my favourate pairing.
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