This is a nice short fic, I liked how Mr. Sheffield was so crushed about Miss Fine running off. And you tied it in with the episode, good job.

My favorite episode. I really liked your story. You wrote Maxwell's thoughts very well. Good job!

"Affair to Dismember" is one of my fave episodes. I've read a lot of alternate endings for it, and this is truly one of the best! Keep up the good work!

Aw! That's the best alternate ending of that episode, I have read so far. You're a good author, keep writing :)

aw!