This is really well written. I really enjoyed the two different story lines and the way they all come together at the end. It was great to read and I just thought you should know I thought it was fab. :D

Brilliant! That was awesome! Too bad it's over. :)

This story is cool!

Ree's a great character,and Rommie got a new pal to hang out with!

The whole Harper/Trance plot line is just the b story.Dylan/Becka/Ree is the A story.

Keep it up with Ree.

It's too bad you had to end this... but not bad for your first try. thank you for sharing this.

Very nice conclusion to a great story. I hope Inspiration comes knocking again and gets you to write another soon.

Great story! I really enjoyed reading it.

Cute... very cute. I'm glad they got everything sorted out.

Awesome!

Certainly goes out 'with a bang'. Good chapter.

nice... i like this a lot

Love the dialog between Beka and Dylan. Great stuff

Good stuff. 'Course, Ree is gonna be awfully mad when she finds out that Dylan played that little trick on her. Hopefully they manage to pry her out of the Maru first.

Very much looking forward to the Harper/Trance conclusion!

Very good! I like how you handled things.

Very nice... can't wait to see what else you have in store for Trance and Harper.

Will be interesting to see if Harper learns Trances secret.

And what it is Ree up to?