|Reviews for Gateway home|
| Cpt. Ritter 8/7/04 . chapter 1
Not bad if it's your first fic. Not bad at all. It's a different style of writing than what I use but it's still quite good. Once again, extremely well done for a first fic.
P.S. It's tough to write decent Freespace stories. The space combat has so many things happening at once. Check out my FS2 fic, Devestation, if you get the chance and keep writing.