more fluffy next tiemokay?

where the tool box came from?

hey nice story, by the way could you make the chapters longer, they´r kinda short, but the story is preety good!
Update soon please!

WHAT!?!?! wheres the rest!?!?!

cuteis~! do more fluff -_- MUAHAHHAH ^_^

Sorry it took me so long to review. This chapter was reeaally cute. Aw! Update son.

Having read through to chapter 6, I would like to say, this is a very nice piece of work. I found the short chapters an easy read and quite enjoyable. You have a fine talent...don't let anyone else tell you otherwise.

Hm.. What to say. Here's what I think:

Little less dialogue, or more description on what's happening. It makes a good effect, trust me.
Number 2, is that I believe you should try not ot repeat the same things over. Remington and Sister Kate's chat was repeated around 3 times. "SHE SHOULDN'T.." and "You should take it easier on Rosette" things.

Other than that, it's quite alright. Continue!

Oh ! write more please!

great jopb! keep it up, but it is really short. Blah, XD

do more please

WOW cool ! this is the first Chrno Crusade fic i,v read ! ADD MORE ! ITS GOOD

person if you do not update soon i will have to hit you over the head...PLEASE UPDATE SOON, or i will go though with the threat!

wew...I wonder who is the man...perhaps is he...Aion? AGGH!!I want to know more!^^ Please update soon!^^ And it's just a thought that I think your chapter and sentences are quite short..and lack of explanation. It's also my weakness but I just think like that!^^ PLease update ASAP! ^_^

O! MYSTERY PERSON! Oh and um I think you should re-read over your chapters when you write because you made...alot of mistakes...yeah. But its still good! WOH! Update soon!