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| Bunch-o-Nuts 2007-02-07 ch 5,  | abuseHoly crap, that was one of the best stories for Ronin Warriors I have ever read...I need to start reading more dramas written like this. It was also really cute how Touma and Seiji hooked up. Are there any continuations? And Split read this, but failed to mention it to me?! I'll have to hunt her down... |
| Celena 2004-10-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseGreat story. My favorite person is Seiji and Shin! |
| Natsuuro 2004-10-24 ch 5, | abuse*sniffles a bit* I- LOVED IT! It was a great story!! I say, you have a great gift for writing! I hope you do more stories! I want to say that you would do good at writing! Please write more fics! |
| Split Persona 2004-08-21 ch 5, | abuseKathrine: We definitely like this story! JC: It was good and the very end was sweet so that held out the slight fluff required for every story. Kathrine: The only thing that we could see that might be wrong is that the story seems rushed. The ending just came too fast. JC: Although, that could just be our subconscious pension for long chapter stories. Kathrine: Yes, we know there was shounen ai, and VERY little of it. We have NO problem with that and people better not throw a fit over just that. JC: If you think that something is missing, go through the story again and see if you would have preferred something to go opposite the way it did, or if you realized you left something out that you originally planned to put in. That could be it. Kathrine: We think you have great potential. We'd love to read more fomr you later on down the line. |
| WyndShard 2004-08-12 ch 4, | abuse*Why* does this story not have any more reviews? ;_; You're doing an absolutely awesome job with this fan fiction -- it's one of the best Yoroiden Samurai Troopers fics I've ever read. The characterizations you are doing for each of the Troopers are perfect, and the story line itself is extremely intriguing and just..gah. Words cannot express how much I adore your story :D Ye must update as soon as possible~ |
| Split Persona 2004-08-10 ch 4, | abuseJC: This is such a good story! That was SUCH a Ryo thing to do. Kathrine: What? Rushing in to save the day even if he might get killed in the process? Yep, definitely Ryo. JC: We can't wait for the next chapter. This story is just getting better with each new one you put out. Kathrine: We wondered if any of the other Masho are going to make an appearance? Rajura/Dais/Jirougorou knows more about acts of the mind than Anubis/Kale/Kujuurou. JC: Yeah, he might know something that would help more than the others. As previously stated, we'll be waiting for the update. |
| Split Persona 2004-08-08 ch 3, | abuseKathrine: Finally! We've been trying to review this for days. Something just kept going wrong with the website. JC: Well, we like this story. Especially since it goes deeper into the aftermath of New York. We don't think anyone believes that he just suddenly put his life together like nothing was wrong. Kathrine: And you even added in the bond between Seiji and Anubis! Man, I love this. Seiji-angst rules! More please! JC: We'll be keeping a look out for your next update. |
| Jess 2004-08-08 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is really good...update it soon |
| Celesta SunStar 2004-08-07 ch 2, | abuseWhat? No one's reviewed this yet? Criminal! This is excellent! And you have Anubisu, sorry Kujuurou now. I always thought those two would end up close. Keep going, PLEASE keep going. |