 Tetsu Deinonychus 10/8/07 . chapter 5This might be my favourite Reboot fic, out there.
It's fantastic.
(Though, Kermit's review does make some valid points, but the story's good enough to overlook those) |
 yingyanggirl 8/17/07 . chapter 5too bad that this is discontinued as this was getting good. |
 avidgokufan 4/12/06 . chapter 5Pretty good. It is an interesting take. you should continue. |
 Agent66 8/26/01 . chapter 1Hey! I'm writing this review just so I can tell you that, yes. Mainframe Summer's Nightmare does have a sequel. IN fact, it's the first of three(maybe four?) stories. The next is entitled "Bytes of Passage" and is about Enzo's graduation from the Academy and his 18th birthday. The third story is entitled, "Memories Are Made of This" and is about the Twin City disaster, as well as how the work of Dot's father could help an outbreak of bugs. I'm still writing them, but stay tuned! email me if you'd like a sneak peak! |
 Nhorse 4/15/01 . chapter 5This is great, hwen are you oing to write the rest, soon I hope! |
 Wrin Chikaya 2/25/01 . chapter 5I like the premise a lot; the alternative-reality thing doesn't take away from the story at all. The teensy little parallels to the third season of the actual show makes you squirm in your seat and coo "I remember that line from such-and-such episode..." But phrases like 'That second was somewhat a rest day' make me wont to spew my trademark line; it needs a proofread. It looks like you got ahead of yourself with the ReBootisms and then forgot about them for the rest of the fic. It's excellent, though, I'm glad that you wrote it like this; it's an excellent beginning and it's any author's guess as to where it's going from here. Chroma/Daemon is a *nice* touch. How else would somebody have gotten into the academy to infect the Guardians? Logically, that would be the first place to start; but I'm getting ahead of myself plot-wise. I want to know what happens with Frisket, personally; don't forget about my favorite red and yellow plastic doberman :) ... the mushyness makes me squirm, I'm glad you didn't go overboard with it; the stuff you did write is characteristic of teenage years and is very appropriate for the subject material you're writing for. It's obvious you put a fair amount of thought into these last two chapters, and it's very impressive. Keep up the good work and I'm certain the rest of the fic should churn out just as impressively. |
 Spookygirl 2/25/01 . chapter 5 Great job! You've got to finish this ASAP! I can't wait for the next part! |
 Naoko 2/22/01 . chapter 4 Wahoo! That was great! I really like where the plot is going so far! Who is that mysterious Chroma? Hrm... |
 Kermit 2/4/01 . chapter 3 Em ... Why are they sending their one guardian (& his dog) off to school during a war? The plan is to hold off the evil viruses while Enzo completes his undergrad? And if they could send him to the net, shouldn't they be sending him there to, oh, I don't know, GO GET SOME REAL GUARDIANS AND BRING THEM BACK TO HELP? |
 Naoko 2/4/01 . chapter 3 Great concept! Keep writting! |
 RealDream 2/3/01 . chapter 2this is a good beggining, but I can't really tell how good it will be since you have only stated what we already know happend, so keep writing, and I hope to see more soon. |
 Adam 2/3/01 . chapter 1 Interesting premise. I'm curious to see what you'll do with it. Please continue! |