Bravo and well done! This was a tale wonderfully told! Thank you for completing it for us, and sharing the cool poem.

I love your story! Thank you for writing it and for posting the poem.

Bravo! I'm a sucker for a happy ending. Nicely done!

oh i love a good clifhanger! the suspense is killing me! update real soon ok.

Sniff.. Sniff.. I am really sad about this... But I won't kill you.. I promise. You are very good at this.

I like Elena.. I think she's good for Rhade..

This is so good! I like Rhade undercover. He seems very convincing. Go Alexandra3

ok, i got 1/2 way through this chap be4 i had to go, so i printed the rest. letcha know what i think later! (its really good so far)

I love it! I really like how you show Rhade's feelings for Elena and how his protective instincts are stirred by her. Keep writing, please.

Personally, I thought the scene was very good. It could perhaps have used a bit more description, but neither would you want to overdo it, or it would become confusing. All in all, not bad.

As for dorms and not being able to watch Andromeda, I know what you mean. I am in the same situation at the moment... :(

i liked it. reat chapter, its all moving so nicely, i love how it flows.

I love how this fic is progressing. Good luck with classes.

i so love Rhada, hes such a sweety isnt he? way to go, very cute

hope you like your new dorm, update whenever you can. love these last two cchapters, elena is really cool, you did a very nice job writing her, im glad she doesnt ever come off as a mary sue. hm. i did watch a late episode of drom and have this weird dream when i fell asleep on a friends rug. i attributed it to caffienne and sugar though. i think i will try that though. maybe an idea for a fic will come of the dream.

Great update! Might I compliment you on the way you seem to be building the relationship between Rhade and Elena. Not too fast (which is unnatural) or too slow (which is boring), but just right so far. Keep it coming!