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Squrlie Jack
2006-02-09
ch 9,
abusei love it! I really hope you continue it soon!
sparkycola1
2005-11-01
ch 9,
abuseAw, you sound so much like me when i wrote fanfic- i was so bad at updating lol.

Pleaase update though- Harper's in trouble!! Who's that guy in his cell?! Gah, the helplessness is gonna drive him nuts! {Harper}

Please add more- and - long chapters are GOOD! =D

You're doing great- nice writing style like it's an episode, i like that =)

Sparky
RagdollStuffy
2005-09-29
ch 9,
abuse0.0

'twitches maddly'

Please.. please.. update soon =D
jay
2005-09-01
ch 8, anon.
abusehey we need more of a story
RagdollStuffy
2005-08-11
ch 8,
abuseNicely written, please write again soon.
Nate
2005-08-11
ch 8, anon.
abuseThis is such a good story but I probably reviewed already. But i just wanted to say that i only saw parts of A clock work orange but it is my favorite book
Amber
2005-08-11
ch 8, anon.
abuseI just started reading and I think it is a wonderful story. Please update soon. Good luck with school you have great talent I hope you are able to use it in school.
Amber
LittleRedhead
2005-08-10
ch 8,
abuseAw short chapter.

Poor Harper. I'm sure he'll figure out the flaw in the controller. I trust the Harper.
emoras
2005-07-30
ch 7,
abuseAww harper, i love the last chapter showing everyone's point of view and determination to find him!
This needs updating soon cause it's so good!
EMILY
NATE
2005-07-14
ch 7, anon.
abusePlease update soon! I m really enjoying this story
parisindy
2005-07-12
ch 7, anon.
abuseexcellent bit great to see more from you
Beastfire
2005-07-12
ch 7,
abuseThis is good so far. Don't worry...I'm pretty sadistic too, right, Ivy?
Ivy: Yeah, tell me about it. I still remember what you had happen to me last month...when I got my arm halfway amputated, ankle broken, that microchip in my back...and that was BEFORE the torture! That started with being KO'd, then strapped down, electrocuted, hit a couple times, having that vine force the air from my lungs, having thorns grow on said vine, and last, but not least, when those morons slashed my wrists! They probably wanted it to look like a suicide!
Beastfire: I do my best...and that was all in one story! Update soon!
Death-Muncher
2005-05-18
ch 6,
abuseI LOVE THIS STORY!
You are a goddess!
Please, please, please update soon!
This whole mind controller thing is super cool. And when the crew of the Andromeda do find Harper he won't be able to go with them cuz he's being controlled. Oh! Angsty!
mizor
2004-12-25
ch 6, anon.
abuseLooking forward to the next chapter but will wait paitently until you have caought up with your schoolwork.
L. C. Brotherton
2004-12-22
ch 1,
abuseYikes! This moved really quickly, and I'm looking forward to more reading.
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