it was great clavel! i loved it! that was so cute how jesse came back to life, the whole wishing thing. wow great job!:)

This is good!

Write more Jesse/Suze Fluff I really can't get enough of it!

That was so good! I loved it! Jesse is so hot! haahahahaahahaha

I'm seriously hoping this is not a one shot! If it is...AH! I cant believe you would do that to people! You evil evil monkey you! Ha ha, just kidding. Anyways, you have to continue this! It is so good! I love how Jesse took advantage of Suze sleeping. I liked that part. And the part where he pushed her up against the wall and started some major PDA. I also like his comment about his girlfriend being a good kisser. I lover that. That it was cute.

I want more!

Toy

aw, i loved it

Much love for this fic! You write such great stories. I noticed that you keep apoligizing for "bad grammar," but I've never noticed any major grammar mistakes, if any. Keep writing fics!

cute

wonderful. Absolutely wonderful... you could probably, of course, make it into more than a one shot (::hopeful look::) but it was a wonderful story nonetheless.

Ah, this was so sweet! I loved it _

aw Clavel (or alex, w/e you prefer) what a sweet fanfic! its so adorable!

you might wanna fix this though - it gave me a heart attack when i read it...

"Suze and David kissed quickly before he got down and went off the street. David seemed a bit disgusted in the face of tongue activity between Jesse and Suze, but he managed to bit back the "gross" that was on the tip of his own tongue."

erm, dont you mean suze and JESSE kissed quickly?

lol i just had to put that in there, it freaked me out!

AMAZING! KEEP WRITING!

*Querida*/Hauntedgurrl

Aww! That was so cute, Clavel! Right on! Fruit!

Anyway...

That was the cutest thing I have ever read. I'm putting this on my fav stories list. It was just too cute for words. Aw. I'm just gonna point out one thing:"Suze and David kissed quickly"

I assume that meant to be Suze and Jesse, but eww. Lol. You're funny. This was so cute!

Kat.

I loved the end! Aw, beautiful.

Yay!I liked that!"I would say that my girlfriend is a great kisser."Hehe!

Good stuff. I loved when Jesse's like, "I would think my girlfriend is a good kisser." Good stuffs!

"I have a very dirty mind."

I think I died of laughter there. _

But seriously, this was great. Nice J/S fluff. _-

And it's always good to put in a Buffy or Angel reference. *laughs* _

Emily

(P.S. PEACE, LOVE, FRUIT, & JESSE! Go JFC! Hehe.)