beautiful...just beautiful!...it was all sweet and endearing to me...totlly love!!

Your story is great. I loved how you made Kakashi hit the wall. By the way your poem is pretty good. Would you mind if I made a copy of it and of course placed your screen name on it, I think it is a keeper. Let me know if I can. Thanks.

your story is very romantic. thank you so much

The poem in the end is pretty. This is such a nice story and it's beautifully written.

so sweet!

i don't know what you're talking about, i liked the poem!!
i liked the way the story was organized, the whole backwards time progression and all that. it worked pretty well!
Kakashi and Iruka's 'confession' scene was...well, srsly cliche, but in a very comforting way! i liked it, it made me smile!
good job!
~toodles

Great fic. The poem was GOOD and was a touching addition to the ending, meaningful and stuff. Nice job, hun.

I loved your "Warning Sign" Very well written and witty!

I got to the end of the first chapter and starting angst-ing over the cliffhanger, before I realised I was a huge idiot and you'd already finished that story a good four years ago. I love the conflicting personalities and emotions you've given them, all in all, I loved it. Thank you for sharing

I really like the poem. It's very pretty ^_^

Aw. That was so sweet. I liked that you made Kashi punch the wall, heh. It just seemed so in-character for him and it spoke volumes about what he felt. I also like the poem/song... it sounds like a ballad (I know a ballad is extremely longer than this and such, but yeah XD).

Nice job. I loved the concept ^^

"Not afraid to die..." he repeated with difficulty. Blood trickled at the corner of his mouth. "Because..."

"Iruka ..."

"... been dying ... a little everyday ... since I met you."

That is so... Starwars! Padmé and Anakin scene just before they enter the colosseum in the second movie. ^w^


Great portrayal at the end imo. I love agnsty stuff.

That was sweet!

How Kakashi decided to face his feelings for Iruka (of course it comes as no surprise for him to wait until Iruka is on the verge of life and death to do it though@_@) once and for all! I like the idea of Iruka becoming a jounin very much.

Well done!

Aww this is adorable

so fluffy,your poem is so fluffy!Dont woory though,the story was all serious and dramatic,so it was really nice to indulge in a bit of warm fluff.You timed it perfectly!The story was so beautiful,it took my breath away.your poem is really adorable!