what are you talking about? the poem is beautiful!, you have talent, I'm serious!

loved the story, stupid Kakashi, he really doesn't get it does he? but thank you for not killing Ruka, I prefer happy endings, if I want to cry I can go back to RL, on FF I want to grin like an idiot, which is what your ending made me do.

so wonderful story and very sweet poem!

Oh, what another lovely little fic of yours. Thank-you so much!

please write a sequel ",

Reading through the Dolphin X Scarecrow community, and found this lovely little piece. It was good. What really impressed me, though, was the song you wrote at the end. Very appropriate and lovely. Thank you. :)

The poem was gorgeous! And I adored this story. I was biting my fingernails!

That was amazing, and your English is beautiful, I don't know what you're concerned about!

not much more to say besides :D

My first review ( i signed up just to give it) - I thought the poem was lovely.I love Kakairu/irukaka courting/mating dance/ figuring it out stories the BEST. Many thanks.

beautiful...just beautiful!...it was all sweet and endearing to me...totlly love!

Your story is great. I loved how you made Kakashi hit the wall. By the way your poem is pretty good. Would you mind if I made a copy of it and of course placed your screen name on it, I think it is a keeper. Let me know if I can. Thanks.

your story is very romantic. thank you so much

The poem in the end is pretty. This is such a nice story and it's beautifully written.

so sweet!

i don't know what you're talking about, i liked the poem!

i liked the way the story was organized, the whole backwards time progression and all that. it worked pretty well!

Kakashi and Iruka's 'confession' scene was...well, srsly cliche, but in a very comforting way! i liked it, it made me smile!

good job!

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Great fic. The poem was GOOD and was a touching addition to the ending, meaningful and stuff. Nice job, hun.