May I say you have an amazing way with words? You're story is bothering me because I don't know how it continues! Please write more and soon!

This is a really good story! Usually I'm not that fond of stories like this, but this one seems to be very well written. Only a few words here and there are misplaced. In regards to a plot line, it might be easiest to just have an ultimate thing you want to happen. Don't worry too much about the stuff in
between.

Hey
I love this story, its really good
I hope you will update very soon :)

Well i love your story and cant wait to see what happens next~! Your a really good writer and i--for once(it doesnt happen often)--am really excited to see whats going to happen next in your story! ^_^

I don't know whats wrong with these readers ...maybe they are retarded.
Because i Love [

Actually my mind didnt click on the blue eyes .. i think my brai n skipped that part of the sentence ..it does that a lot .. hmm.. m.b i shuold go to the doctor.. dang,...kouga..means unnecessary conflicts.. bcaz of self -esteem issues jeeze!
o well just update!
IM BEGGING U [ told u so lol]
please
please
PRETTY FRICKIN PLEASE!
lol
update...and ill buy u a cookie...^-^..
...no lie, im not jokin ill seriously buy u a cookie and send it if u update...
lol
r4k
=]

UR MEAN!
The next chapter is the lastu updated!
PLease im gonna start beggin next review.
=/
well i liked this chap the most 4 some reason
o0 well onward ->
r4k

No i like it better lik this.. all of them being in school will be like other stories.. plus then one of them would have noticed something sooner or later
=]

Since u asked for a review i shall review!
LOL
-> are u gonna continue this story?
caz it said u havent updated since 06 and it 07 .. juts wonderin.
=]
NE WHO!
to chapter 3 ->

That was Frickin AWESOME!
I felt lik i was in some movie theater.. hey so wat is ur first language?
-> and why dont u get a beta than?
=]
r4k
I LOVE IT!

Hello!

You should update your wonderful story! I love how you capture the characters and how you write! Im looking forward to a new update! I really love it and cant wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!! ^_^

Great Story...

Hope to hear more of...

I would say yes to be your beta...but I have no clue what a beta is exactly...if you let me know I will be more than happy to help. Email me at riah89@ and but under subject Beta so I know who it is...I like your story so far...If you can't email me put it up with your next chapter...til then toodlez!

Lovely story darhling...Sorry just trying out an accent. Anyways. Your story is so go. I just couldn't leave it. Please do let this story go cause if you are I'll be in just as much misery as Inuyasha. Ciao! ;}

i havent even read the 1st chapter yet but i kno ill love it. i even added it to my fav stories. i just LOVED your trailer. angel israfel sounds awesome!