 Lissewen 1/13/05 . chapter 1 This is good, You wrote BA, Murdock, and Face really well, but Hannibal seemed kinda ooc to me. I can understand BA being mad at Murdock and Face one minute and cool with it the next, but Hannibal doesn't seem like he'd change his mind that fast. Other than that, this is an awesome fic! You are talented, creative, wonderful, brilliant, magnificent, clever, ...(damn! I can't think of any more adjectives. If you keep writing like this, I might have to get a thesaurus just to tell you how awesome you are.) |