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Twinfetish 4/6/11 . chapter 1
Sooooooooooo Cute! I love this to pieces! And to think I found it on delicious! Lol. I need to search on that site way more often if it gives me gems like these.
damncritic 12/1/10 . chapter 1
aww. this is cute! i don't particularly like ryoxmomo but this is sweet :)
Khelc-sul Renai 4/28/09 . chapter 1
Momo's worried about nothing! There isn't anyone else!

I love Ryoma's line at the end of this.

You have a good look into Momo's mind here.

Well written! Good read!
azurefirewulf 9/15/08 . chapter 1
cute! X3! luv ya a lot hope you write more
Azamiko 5/30/08 . chapter 1
*grin* Makes sense.
kerri 4/13/08 . chapter 1
Ok, I'm like 4 years late, but I had to say I loved this, it was perfect. MomoRyo 4ever.
The Night Owl is Addicted 1/23/08 . chapter 1
Uwah! i'm reading so many wonderfully great ficcys today!

-oh, please don't mind that this review was done at least four years after you've written 'Taken' . -

going back.

It was so cute! how momo was contemplating about their closeness and yet not have any clue about how close they really were in ryoma's point of view! it was just so adorable how you've written this! and making it in momo's pov just adds to the greatness of it! and have i said how cute it is that momo's getting jealous when he thinks that someone *else* would be with ryoma instead of him! Kyah!

nice job!
Falcom 12/14/07 . chapter 1
that was WAY cute!

The last line's perfect XD
speadee 11/13/07 . chapter 1
Good job on Momoshiro's POV! What did Echizen mean? Did he mean that he has been taken by Momoshiro, or he just made up a quick excuse to get rid of fangirls? How do they find so much time to hang out with school, practice, and homework?
Aubergine 28 8/20/07 . chapter 1
So.friggin.cute. GAH! Definitly a favorite. I ruv it!

-Penguin Girl
oval 7/14/07 . chapter 1
The last line is just AWW.
Lady Artemist 6/7/07 . chapter 1
lol, nice
Silver and Black Flames 3/25/07 . chapter 1
I'd give you a long, detailed review, but I have to wake up in four hours, so instead you get my SQUEE!review.

I'm usually not much of a fan of the pairing, but this was just too adorable. I can see it all so clearly, and you kept them in character nicely. I can totally imagine Ryoma saying that at the end. And it's just so fluffy that it made me go "Aw!" and want to brush my teeth when I read the last line. Very nicely written on the whole, and very well done.
tsurikato 3/9/07 . chapter 1
wow. XD; i dont know why, but this fic just took my breath away.

i'm not one for actively reading shounenai or yaoi fics, but i love the amount of detail you went into with Momo and his confusion about Ryoma being taken. Ryoma's action to signify him and Momo? that just made me think how REAL it was, and i was just in awe.

you win! :D
DarkAngel048 11/18/06 . chapter 1
Good fic!
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