great poem it describes him so well... poor tokiya... keep up the good work ^^

well, that was nice, but who's this person who melted dear Mi-chan? i sure hope it's fuuko. i just love those two. hope you'll add another chapter to clear everything up, and perhaps even a sequel about tokiya and fuuko, if that's not too much. see you next time. Ja!

ohh! its really good!! ^^