LOL. Compared it to an MMO in your A/N. Priceless. And a very good comparison actually... I could see how playing a lot of that could inspire this! xD

*hums happily* I liked this one a lot. I usually don't take to one-shots but this one was great! I made a face at the "office" setting... But it /did/ kind of remind me of Yu Yu Hakusho so it's not like I'm unfamiliar with the idea of a office scene in the afterlife. But I don't know, I think I'd prefer it more without any kind of background setting. *shrugs*

Anyway, your theory is GREAT and really, really interesting and handy. I also liked how you talked about the jewel NEEDING to be broken. Because, of course, if Naraku kept coming after it back then it definitely would've been a problem...

Yeah, so, this was great! Thanks for sharing it!

Interesting!! =O

Ari chan

Well this explains it! Nicely done. I love that you make the time paradox work for your theory with threats of red tape. Also, the whole beating herself up about breaking the jewel? I've never quite gotten that since, as you say, Naraku would've won or it would be monster of the week until Kagome got sick of it and took the jewel back to modern times leaving poor Midoriko stuck in there with lots of stinking youkai. Solid one shot.

That's so funny... er... kinda. Is that mean of me?

just a bit of a trekker-like reasoning to it... deja vu

i have read a sampling of your stories a while ago and just bookmarked your profile for future referance... i neglected to review, and i made the error of not reading all of your skillfully crafted works... i am now taking steps to correct that grievous error as time permits.

thank you,
ginny

and thus comes to play where time traveling actually works in Kagome's favor. on the other hand, one does have to wonder how time flows between the present era and the Sengoku Jidai (though when exactly is certainly debatable).

That was Botan? Most awesome!

Oh, cool! ^.^ I love random ideas that make things like this one come up! Quite fun. An intriguing concept, and I like your Botan in this one. *grin* "Oh, for KAMI's sake, not AGAIN!" XD I suppose it would get tiring... much applause for you.

intereting and it does raise a lot of quesion and i raise my glass to you you mange to make me think it a big feat
bleassed be and merry meet again
staralinga moonwicca

Cool idea! Kinda wondered why myself, I mean she is so obviously more than she appears, and if reencarnation works...

Such a good story. Really enjooyed it.

Very interesting and unique idea. I would have never have viewed it in such a way. Great job! Also I found the other possiblity (Naraku coming after the unshattered jewel) unique and original. It was a very likely possiblity had the jewel not accidently shattered. Once again, great story.

Well, i hate Inuyasha, but I love this story.

It confused me, alot, originally though.

Hahaha, when I realized that was Botan I laughed.

Ya, good story...

woot

hm...Interesting...the way you told that story was cool. Wish you could have made it longer though I like long storys for some reason. It was still great. You know the combination of Yu Yu Hakusho and Inuyasha sounds pretty good.Like I said great story ^_^