Ai-yai-yai, poor Lorelai.

No rhyme intended.

Very very intresting and I can see her feelings in this so well. and his.

CoNtInUe!1

Fun story! I wish there were more to the last scene. Loved it, but I'd like to see Lorelai's side of the story as well. Like how she got from that place to sending the toaster.

I have to admit that I read this only because of the intriguing title, but, although it's a bit incoherent at parts, it was a nice little spiel.

I admit it, it was the title that reeled me in. I knew it couldn't be Lorelai talking because then it'd have a name (Bert?) so I was curious who else would care for the toaster? Loved this. Especially the first scene, mae me laugh out loud. Interesting what if you play with in the last scene. I really enjoyed this.

This was a great story, a small moment captured in a very important way. Keep it up! I hope you write more than just fanfic!

"I don't speak French."
"Nicole might."
"Nicole does."
She seems, inexplicably, disappointed in this.

For reasons (somewhat) passing understand, that little part there just got me. This whole thing was great, really, it was amazing.

I (obviously) loved it.

Hehe. If only that had happened on the actual show. Gotta love that title, by the way.

Oh and oddly enough, I can kinda connect with the idea behind this story. I once had a hard time kissing a new boyfriend in the presence of a jewelry box my old one had given me.

Cool!! this is really good! plz post more soon!! i wanna kno wot happens next!
Love Megan

Aw, man, another great piece! Cool title, great narrative structure, wonderful style as usual.

My favorite lines? "He should, really, know how to answer this question, but he's not sure at the moment if did you like it means did you like it or will you forgive me or are we okay now or hey, you want to kiss me now? But now he's thinking like her, and he's pretty certain he just made that last one up."

Also love the way you wrote the almost-kiss.

Keep up the great work!

Okay... that was slightly incomprehensible. Cool, too, and I got butterflies at the end, but who does he want to kill? Lorelai or Nicole?

On another note, I love how you write. Not so much the storylines (which I love too) but your sentences and your words. For some reason, you manage to find the perfect balance between it all. That's why I'm still very interested in "Suspension of Disbelief", even though it's not LL.

great piece. It would've been very interesting if ep. 411 would have ended this way :)

Absolutely and utterly fantastic. I don't need to tell you you've got the banter down to a t, because you already know that, but I love it and I can hear it. And if only we got that scene in that episode. If only.

great job...please write more stories