Nice. Maybe add a Ryuichi version? (Specially after the newest happenings in the last comic.)

Nonethless, a pleasant read. :D

Hey. Nice fic n_n. Um, wanted to point out, in the second chapter, the song isn't yours xD. It's the english translation to "My Will" from Inu Yasha, the translation's taken from n_n;. Just thought I'd notify you of that.

ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC! That was great! You got Hiro in perfect characterization! I'm SO glad you wrote this! It made me want to cry! ;_; This is probably my fav. chapter in any fic! You can tell this is definitely what Hiro feels toward Shuichi. It's so depressing! I'm definitely going to save this chapter and read it everyday. ;D Hiro/Shu forever! You should write more Hiro/Shu fanfics! You have a talent for them. :)

wah! its so poetically romantic!

I love this. It’s so sweet...well the first chapter, but the 2nd was so angsty...anyways, continue soon!

That was so sweet! (flying away into the air^^) You pictured Yuki well.( nods ) he was so sweet and gentle with Shuchi! I think Shuichi deserves that...:) (I'm going to melt soon!)

XD You know, I've never seen Gravitation before but I've heard people mention it and I had to try and read some fanfic. o.o Which is really good. It's really, really good to find fanfic for an anime that isn't non-yaoi *grins* Anyway, nice work. ^.^ I loved it.

-SwiftSilver-
~*~Wings~*~

The Chapter and your song was great. ANd I think you should make it a story with different points like your said. Keep it up and please update soon.

You MUST continue this. You have a talent for writing poetry. I've told you once before and i will say it again. now continue soon or else J/K lol. :P

how sweet ^.^

your song is very sweet. it blends well with your fluffiness. i like the fic. i'm a sucker for yuki Pov's. hehe..

I feel the love! XD *hugs a Kumagoro* XD

That' so sweet, kute, lovely erm... I cant think of any fluffy words that melts my heart...=D

Write more!

Such a cute story.Please do more