Really sweet. Nice work.

Beautiful-very touching and Professor Snape's due
Jo

good fic!

*Nicely* done. Congratulations. Keep up the good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm

Beautiful. I agree that Snape was in love with Lily, and loosing her to James was what finally turned him into the horrible vindictive man he became.

Hi Thirteen Ravens,

I just want to let you know that I added your story, No More Mentors, to my HP fanfiction site Potions, Snitches, and Unlikely Relations jan-aq(dot)potionsandsnitches(dot)net. It's basically just a list of stories, like a giant reccomendation list. :) If you would like me to remove your story, just let me know and i will do so, but I thought that you should know that it was on my list. Thanks for sharing your story.

Chocolate frogs,

Jan

well, maybe u should have elaborated a bit, he's always hated snape, what made him go there?

Lovely.
Short, but lovely.
And I cried ..

Ah, so sad ... but beautiful!

Nice job. Touching and sad.

I think you should right another chapter about what spirit snape,lily,james and sirius think about it

Lovely as always. It is my wish to see much more of your written work, lots of new HP stories. That would make me very happy...

Nice story, and seems very fitting somehow.

Haunting.

you ught to continye this its hayntin
cheerio
aastha