Lovely story, beautifully written. You made a relationship I hadn't considered completely believable and very, very sweet. Well done.

Ah. I don't know how I missed this one. But - absolutely beautiful. And I'd never thought of it before, but I'm glad you made me think of it. Favorite line: "Nessarose's kisses are sometimes cautious, as if there are a hundred rules she's sure she must be breaking, and sometimes fervent, as if she's set on defying them all."

Aw. Cute! Meanwhile, Elphie isn't having anywhere near as fun a time, but that's her own fault.

Not bad. I'm not a big fem slash person, so I can't exactly rave over this, but I will say that it's well written. The bond between Nessa and Glinda subtley grows into something more than just sisterhood. I really like Glinda's thought on how dissimilar Elphaba and Nessa are. "Elphaba never believed in anything, while Nessarose's beliefs are her whole world." Nice job!

Good job!
I really like the idea!
Very well writen.
Very very good.
Can't wait for more!
Keep writing!
~Elphie