Sweet story. Though you DO need a beta mate! I have to be honest. But wasn't Sora dead in the last one. Glad TK's not there and Davis is good in this one. I really didn't like your other story where you attempted to make Davis the bad guy. You have an interesting imagination I'll give you that! But any bashes on Davis I will not be nice about! Davis is a really cool character and people don't give him enough credit! He's so much better than TK and Kari could ever be. She doesn't deserve him or TK!

Kinda cute. Reminds me of the Pheonix. (X-Men)

Tai and Sora all the way... not this new girl

AWESOME FICCIE JANCHAN! KEEP WRITING!

Good! I don't know how but your imagination and/or your fics keep on getting better! _