love the story please contune it

I wonder what gives with her arm and Awesome job! Could you please send me the link when you update next? Thank you and also please try to update soon. This story is so awesome that I don't think it is right for it to go unfinished. See ya when you update.
-wdh

I think a character page would be most useful later on if Rhena is getting more and more suitors. I was wondering if you were still writing this fanfiction as it has not been updated since 05 but then again writer's block is killer. Awesome job!
-wdh

Wow... Kouga is hopeless. Awesome job!
-WdH

Is she a hanyou or something? Awesome job!
-wDh

She has to live. Awesome job!
-wdH

So she's like a prodigy or something. Cool!
-Wdh

AWESOME!! GO RHENA GO! AWESOME!! I loved this story already!
-WdH

Oh, I love the spirit beast thing! That is so wonderful! So cute. Kino must be half-in-love with Rhena already! This is getting to be my kind of story. Please update soon, I want to read more soon. thanks

Wow...I never read something that used the word "wench" that many times before! I liked this a lot. But I think I'm feeling a little critical. For one thing, you were kinda repetitious in one paragraph ie. it was cold and wet. "Eww, I'm cold and wet!" Rhena screamed. Its not like I'm not liking it, I just want you to get better and better. So don't take it personally. I know you're getting better anyway. So keep writing! Let the words flow from your soul!
Davey

One, you need to check that your uploades document matches the fanfiction chapter. Your document says Chapter 9 and it's really chapter 8. Anyway, liked it. Keep up the good work.

That sucks. Her first kiss taken by a cocky two-tailed demon. Although, I find Kino quite attractcive. Most charachters are. A character page would probalby help everyone out a lot with sorting out characters.

I really like Rhena. She reminds me of how I want to be. Strong and not afraid to say what's on her mind. It's funny. She seems to glow a lot like Kagome, looks wise. The fact that Koga is already falling in love with her would suggest that. If the Inu-Gang actually in this story? Or are they omitted? Just wondering because I really would like to see them in here. Great job with the fluff.

just so you know you use two words: oblvious and obvious. They aren't interchangable. Just look back at other chapters and other stuff you posted carefully. Anyway... Aw.

Yepz! One of those is me! I know I've read this a lot of times but I'm taking special care and reading the end of what you have so far.