that chapter was beautiful. I loved the description

Oh, that was gorgeous! So lovely - it really moved me. I love Eragon/Arya - they're so beautiful together. Write more!!

Well, you've managed to degrade Arya to someone who is simply pretty and weak, only meant to be saved an oggled at.

Good job. /sarcasm

Wow! Really good stuff, and the POV changes were not confusing in the least. I think you've captured the moments you set out to very well, taking the characters and making them your own. Congrats on a job well done!

~Red

0.0 ..woah. That was an AWESOME story!! ^_^ I loved it. *adds to faves* Thankies for reviewing my story, I felt I had to retun the favor!!

wow, nice description! Interesting! I like it!

I like. I like very, very, very much. EXTREMELY descriptive, likewise realistic... wow. I LOVE it! One shot? Hm... really good.

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