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apalusa-light
2009-08-10 . chapter 12
Oh, hehehe... I love it. I read 'Mary' a while ago, but I just happened across this one. And yeah, like I said - I love it. It's been a long time since you updated for this story but I think that if you ever get the hankering you should definitely continue. I mean, we've seen how they end up (thanks to 'Mary') but I guess I'm just one of those girls who likes to see the road they travelled too. Anyways, I hope you'll decide to continue on with this story someday - I want to see how they get to where they end up in 'Mary.'
DestinyManifested
2009-01-11 . chapter 12
UPDATE PRETTY PLEASE
alange
2009-01-03 . chapter 12
Um do yu write anymore has this fic been abandoned... do u think it's finished ...what cuase the way chapter 12 leaves one hanging is truly evil ..eviler than most! You write them so beautifully we or I need more .Pretty Please
starrynight348
2008-07-10 . chapter 12
oh my goodness! i LOVE your story. please keep writing! DON'T LEAVE IT HANGING!
Courtney
2008-05-29 . chapter 12
i love it update soon
Amy
2008-03-16 . chapter 12
I'm flipping out I want to know more! This story is keeping me at the edge of my seat and I would love to read the rest soon!! Good job!
frackandbonechick
2008-02-16 . chapter 12
Yes i'm squealing in delight but im also annoyed cuz i just realised that you haven't updated in nearly 2 years... please please please come back and finish this story...

Cheers
Michelle
lennon64590
2008-02-08 . chapter 12
i just found your fic today and i totally loved it! this last chapter-- totally hot! are you ever going to continue this story because it has been a year and a half since you've updated!! please please update your story soon!
loveu2much
2007-11-17 . chapter 12
LOVE IT! But I want Mollie and him to find out about Lindsay and Dean. SON PLEASE.
BehrBeMine
2007-06-12 . chapter 11
“Oh, the lengths you will go to get what you want.”

Hee-hee! I love Mollie's dramatics, I live for their humor! The way she says such things, as such a damsel ascending to the fabled distress. I love that her grandmother has her pegged to a T, as well, and calls her on her very nature that binds them as family and has me so amused.

I love that Lulu's way of teaching Mollie a lesson is to convince Tristan to teach Rory the very lesson Mollie failed to teach. My typing-tongue just had a spasm.

And the agony of uncertainty shows, as always, your forte in writing our tortured Trory pair.
BehrBeMine
2007-06-11 . chapter 10
Goodness, the 'Anne of Green Gables' flourish of flowers is such a lovely sight in my mind. I want it for myself. Sasha would think it the prettiest thing ever, before she picked every last one of the flowers, sniffed it, and then threw it away. Oh, to be two again.

“You can learn a lot from the characters in stories.”

Indeed. I know I learn a lot from the characters in yours.

"The Three Amigos always stuck together, through thick and thin, and sick and sin."

Ooh, I love that line, and what it entails. I wish I had a couple amigos. Or maybe a couple Captain Jack Sparrows on my shoulders to keep the madness company...

"Tristan shuddered at the though of having to face his worst fear over and over again."

You sure have a way of shining light into the dark corners of heartache and misery, and allowing us to SEE them for what they are. In between all of the good-natured humor, no less.
BehrBeMine
2007-06-11 . chapter 6
"Rory ran her fingers lightly over the leather bound novels. This had to be one of those perfect moments in life."

As it would be in mine. What a very Rory moment to be captured in. Do you just KNOW this girl or ARE you this girl? My goodness...

"Alone with her thoughts, she felt even more confused then she did before."

Poor baby. The mishap with Dean really screwed up her trust issues, didn't it? Her trust issues with herself. How horrible for her, and for Tristan, who has to watch this unfold without understanding a whit of it.
BehrBeMine
2007-06-09 . chapter 5
Best part, besides the pseudo-cuddling, is that precious Mollie! I laughed when I knew she would pull out 'Clueless' eventually, and then she did. And the picture of her squealing and jumping back behind the couch, peeking over it only enough to see, is fabulous. Katherine, she's adorable.
BehrBeMine
2007-06-09 . chapter 4
I LOVE the 'Friends' accusations, and I love that they were true. As for myself, I've been out of the closet as a 'Friends' fan for as long as I can remember. In fact, I wonder what it even looks like in that 'Friends' closet...

Tristan, oh, he and his anguish! I love it, I love it.
BehrBeMine
2007-06-07 . chapter 2
"He didn’t want to pull away, only to see her crying again."

And off she ran. Yet again. Oh, my Trory heart...
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