Awkwardness XD Very, very awkward. I sort of want to see that DVD...I've never seen anything about the RileyBijou Grand Hotel. I've seen a lot about other haunted hotels, but not that particular one...Great story ^^

Wow! Just reading Jack's dialogue made me feel uncomfortable. Very few people have the stomach to hear the details of their parents' relationship. You did a great job capturing Danny's discomfort. Kudos for you!

that was cute! father/son bonding! I wish my dad wasn't a jerk and Ya know i'm good i don't need my dad to do that that woiuld give me nightmares!

haha leave it up to Jack Fenton lol. awesome fic

i didn't get completely what the talk was about, and what is a succubus. but other then that i really liked it. good job. later dude

Poor Danny ^_^

this is a great story, I think you should write more. I could actually visualise the characters, too, and I found it kind of funny in parts!

Wow, this is the first Danny/Jack father-son bonding fic I've ever read and I had the good fortune to stumble across this one? Lucky day!

PLEEZ FINISH! It's so adorable! :-)

Thank you for posting! This was an adorable piece of father/son fluffiness- I never get enough of it. It went a lot like how I would have imagined that conversation between Danny and his father, so points for cannon cohesive creativity! My favourite kind. But I'd like to see you apply your obvious understanding of how to take a cannon theme in an non-cannon setting to a more advanced for of technical writing. You didn't make real grammatical errors, but you're still using fairly simple English: which I think you could move beyond. Remember when I saw this that I'm not 'bashing' you, I want to help you improve because I like your understanding of cannon and style in fiction. So keep improving, and thank you for putting out this story.

I loved this story. You wrote it very well, and I found it very funny.
The only thing that confuses me is succumbus or whatever it's called. o.o
What on earth is that?
xD;;
I probably sound like a complete idiot, but, hey!

Good job!
-LI.

Awwe, what a touching story. ^_^ There isn't enough of the family behind Danny in these fanfics. I have to admit, Danny's family is one of the most caring ones I've seen on TV in awhile. But besides that, I love how Jack just rambled on for four hours. Ugh. 'The Talk'. Everyone's worst nightmare, especially when it's your parents. XD;

And I love the parts about the succubus - I thought I was the only person in the world who knew what they were! XD;

My friend Kismet pointed me to this story while talking about how awesome some of the "oldies" are in the fandom.

This is great! Short, sweet, and to the point. The succubus thing was a nice touch to tie everything together. =) A definite fave.

I loeved it. "The Talk" was very funny. Great story!

For your first Danny Phantom fanfiction this was really great! It truly made me laugh! Great job! Keep Writting! ^_^