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Fluffylover123
2009-07-09 . chapter 5
Please update! I really really like it so far! It seems to be getting more interesting after each andevery paragraph! Great Job!
SaNgO MuMbO BuM
2008-07-06 . chapter 5
MaDNeSS!
UpDaTe SoOn ...
OR ELSE!
Epitome of Innocence
2007-09-09 . chapter 3
Congratulations on your first story. The plot idea is interesting and I am pleased with the fact that you explained why they were chosen and all necessary background information instead of just "poofing" it into existence. What I don't like, though, is your "hinthint"ing and "winkwink"ing. Please stop.

It is entirely unnecessary to place an author's note in the middle of your story. If you want to foreshadow something, do it in your story. If you need to clarify something, better explain it in your story. A story can be a lot better when we aren't force-fed opinions or hints. It's frustrating.

I would like to be able to say I will continue reading to see if you improve, but I can't. I just know I would be annoyed beyond words if it's the same and so I won't torture myself that way. I apologize that I couldn't say this any kinder but your tactic is one of my very least favorite. I am simply thankful you found the time to spell check.

Thank you, and have a nice day.
Spirit of Insanity
2007-08-17 . chapter 5
This is really good! But you said you had no plans of ditching it...LIAR! Man, I really like this one too...sorry, but it really disappoints me when I find a good fic, but the author ditched it.
sam
2007-04-11 . chapter 5
great story line, but can you plz plz update.
must...read...more:)
hermonine
2006-10-17 . chapter 5
Nice story. Keep up the good work and update soon!
Upon.A.Cliche.
2006-10-05 . chapter 5
That was SO good!
Inuharmony
2006-09-06 . chapter 2
like it
koiichi no namae kaitou
2006-04-20 . chapter 5
aw.. i want more!! *pout**pout*
dimensiontimetraveler
2006-04-04 . chapter 5
That is so unfair and evil!! y kagome? y did she have to clean that **'s room? no offense, i really hate kikyo.. she's a snoby **! hehhe anyways pls tell me if u update
Anonymousfanfic
2006-03-26 . chapter 5
This is really great you should continue it.

What if it turns out that Kagome's father is/was very good friends with Sesshomaru's family. That's another reason why she got accepted.

That might spoil Kikyo's plan in turning Kagome into her personal slave.

Wonder if their was very strict rules that Kikyo needed to follow, only to be allowed to come here. Something that her father have yet to tell her about or she doesn't care about.

For those that are there, through money have very strict rules and if they don't follow/break, then Masataka has the right to throw them out.

Since he is very good business man, he probably has done his work to make sure everything was legal and got approved by several of his lawyers. so the parents/students could sue. If they tried it would be just wsste of their parents money.

What if it turns out that Kikyo got one of the bad lucking dorms. Maybe taht's why she wanted Kagome to fix it up for her.

Wonder if someone like Masataka shows up, to announce the real "year perfect", or whatever it was.

Please update real soon.
This is really great.

Wonder when she will meet Sesshomaru and Inuyasha.
What if she had no idea who they are when they meet. I'm sure Kikyo wouldn't like it one bit.

Not a Kikyo fan, when she is like this, but if she change her ways and stay that way. If she stays mean and think she can get away with anything, I want all her plans to backfire and get kicked out of school and feel humalation.
I'm sure her daddy wouldn't like it if she gets kicked out of school.
kagome-sess
2006-03-02 . chapter 5
OK!tell you what you need to finish this story beacause i am going crazy in here i think i just might die! and if i have to die i am taking you with me got it!

^_*!
haraf
2006-01-13 . chapter 5
don't let kagome take that crap without a fight!
i thought you said she had a firely personality!
MAKE HER FIGHT BACK...I DON'T CARE!..LET HER DECLARE WAR ON THAT DAM ** KIKIYO!
Hime-Kagome Higurashi
2006-01-02 . chapter 5
Does Kikyo know Kagome?Why didn't Kagome reliatate when Kikyo told her to clean her room?Update soon.^_^
Mimiru Chan
2005-12-23 . chapter 4
ok so when you say their in doggi doo you mean their in a whole lot of crap.
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