that was amazing you have a gift with words

nyan. i love. tis cute...

This is beautiful. All the contrasts you used, which also complimented each other, describes love rather eloquently. Comparing Kurama's love for Hiei to a seed he wants to nurture within him was timeless. You should write more poetry like this, it's worth coming back for!

wow... i wish i could write like that

Beautifully written!! Emotions are truly flowing and using wonderful diction, you have the readers feeling the same thing, Great job!!

Very descriptive, great use of emotive and evocative language and imagery. Well done.
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DreamWeaver

Whoah... made me think, I loved the line
"It’s like a soft blanket, only useful when what’s around you is cold."
So true.
Ja!

Wow... this was really good! I love the line 'It’s a beautiful thing when you can understand who you are, where you’re going. I’m not ready to be swept away by the uncontrollable winds. I want to keep understanding just a bit longer.'

That's really awesome!

LaTeR ^__^

Kage Ohkami

Ooh, I like this one... Very nice style, among other things. Keep it up.

*sighs* that's so sweet. i luv kurama! *nods* this was a nice one-shot, it really captured his feelings i think. *thumbs up* great job, keep up the good work. *waves* ja ne!