Kyaah! That was actually pretty good. SoraxKairi is my favorite couple from KH. Some people like RikkuxKairi and more so, RikkuxSora, but Sora and Kairi belong together. Anyway, nice poem.

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Aww, that's sweet! But for some reason it reminds me of Sk8er Boi, which I know it doesn't sound like it at all but I do make weird connections... anyway, doesn't really matter! Oh, write a Cleris fic too please? For me?

Aw, that was so cute. I'm kinda going through the same thing...Anyways, I was reading your profile and I saw you were from Christchurch. Seriously? I'm from down south in Invercargill (it's half cool, half boring). Anyways, keep up the good work! Adding to fave authors...

Short and sweet. That's the way I like it, just like tootsie rolls! It is things like these that restore my faith that there is still culture in the world. This is actually my favorite kind of literature. (dont tell!) its more than okay BUT you can improve. W/ practice I would like to read more of your work.

*applauds* That was short. Still, NICE! _ Great job! Thanks for reviewing in my fanfic by the way. And sorry for not updating _;

former : maria-noel

now : kira kawamura

Wow! i love this! really cool!

that was awsome! do some more! do some more! _ im hyper.

this is a very sweet poem, and a very good reflection of Kiari, well done

yo! - this was short and sweet, you managed to describe Kairi's innocence about her and Sora's friendship... keep writing!

really sad but really good!

It was kind of short, but you're the author and that's your choice, so I can't really complain. That, and most of my works are short too, so it would be hypocritical to gripe.

Being a poet myself, I tend to go a little harsh when reviewing poetry, so please don't mind. Now, some say poetry has to rhyme or click, but for me its about rhythm. Poetry is like music - to a beat, and flowing. Overall, I'd say it flows pretty well, but the pattern (If you intentionally had one, can't tell) is a little off. The first four lines seem to go together, and the next four as well. But then you have three more lines and a repeat of the "You were my boy thing" ... Maybe you intentionally did it that way, I don't know.

One last thing - I don't get the "Stare at your name" part... or maybe I'm just really tired. Forgive.

All in all, pretty good. SK is an awesome pairing, and this sure beats a lot of the SR pairing stories out there. Hope to see more from you... ROCK ON!

i really liked this poem! great work! keep it up! _

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btw you might want to make lengthy stories because your writing talent shines

I really loved this poem and I hope you make more of them because they were really good!

Aw... I love it... It's SO KYEWT!