You should continue, pretty please?

First off, I want to say that this is one of my, or probably just my favorite LennexShuyin story! It carries the same elements as the game without being annoyingly melodramatic and serioius like many other highly rated LxS fics. In this one, Shuyin's character is great! In so many others, he's a player or something
and Lenne's great too! She actually has a personality
I like the use of hover cars, coincedentally, I used hover cars in my LxS fic too...weird
You also write really well and I cannot wait to read more!

Oh, Yay for Shuyin and Lenne.

They're getting closer and closer...

I really love the plot, who knew that Lenne wasn't so great at being a summoner? xDD

Very creative, I really can't wait for the next chapter.

yeah...so...are you ever going to update this one?

Wow. Please update.

Its a really good story. I love the way you made Shuyin and Lenne's personality blend in with their backgrounds and surroundings. Its great. Please do update soon.

Oh! Please update! Such a good fanfic! =]

i love your story! well, shuyin is not a guardian~ blah blah blah! lolx...please update soon! I can't wait for chapter 19 to come! please update soon!

This is really good!! :D

I have to ask, what AlBhed decoder are you using, cos it is different to the one I have ...thus I want to check which is correct!

Also, what is the purpose of teh pilgramage as there is no final Aeon to get, and no Sin to beat?

If you want, I could proof read the story, though I havent before so you might want someone with more experience to do it? :D

Looking forward to more!!

Yay, you updated! I loved Lenne and Shuyin's story and this is a wonderful take on it.

Finally!! I was wondering if you were ever going to update. Well better late then never. Good chapter and update soon.

please finish this i love lenne and shuyin so much it feels like this should of been the scritp to the game your a great writer and please please dont stop!!

This is an excellent story! I feel as though I'm reading the plot for an actual Final Fantasy game. I don't think you're rushing anything, and I think your mixture of original characters is wonderful (usually I don't like too many original characters)! ^_^ I look forward to the remainder of the story, and I hope that you will go up to their tragic end. You kind of already wrote it, though. =3 Good work.
I apologize to admit that you do have a few typos here and there, and that I, too, would suggest a beta reader. But who, oh who could do it?
Ooh, ooh, pick me! xD I would be honored to proofread your work if you so desire.
~Galenchia

this is by far the cutest lenne/shuyin story i have read. i hope u take the time to update soon

Omg I LOVE this story! It's the best Lenne and Shuyin fic I've seen. Please update soon. I can't stand the suspense!! ;) Lol!

excuse me. this story is great but i've been waqiting 4 months 4 the enxt chapter...whens it commin?