I LOVe this story line. PLEASE update VEARY SOON!

Great Story!! Did you write any more to it?

Thats it? Please, continue. I would like to know what happens next. :)

plz plz plz plz plz plz update i really wanna find out what happens ( if you update i'll sell you my soul lol ) plz
zoe
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plz plz plz plz continiiue with this story i really wanna no wot happens plz

zoe

Its great! I love it so far. I really hope you plan to update it soon!

plz plz plz plz continiue i wanna no wot happens to dawn

very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up!

I think this is really interesting. I hope you continue this soon.

i love this story, cant wait to see where you go with it

kinda makes me wanna laugh. why haven't you continued it yet?

I can't wait for the next chapter :-)

I've always digged the Angelus/Dawn stories! This one is better! Please continue!

I like it please write more don't make me beg although I will if that will get you to write more sooner I can grovel at your feet or something but please don't make me even though I will but I don't want but...wait does all this sound repetitive?

peace out

good story...but i believe the forces are telling me to tell you to keep writing

remember yoda is small but he is strong...(use the force)