I like your writing and your style im new to writing so could you also read my story and tell me wat u think?

its really good. i really expected something kinda cliche, but its not! you do really well with the Logan accent thing. o!! romance!! lol. its sweet, cute, and just good. keep updating!

This fic is getting more and more interesting. The growing relationship between Logan and Kaylan, is interesting to read. Keep up the good work.

I liked this chapter a lot. I like the interaction between Ororo and Logan. And I lked Scott's attitude in this chapter. Well done.

Like I said to you before, I really like how Logan, Ororo, and Scott interact with eachother. I really love the story. I just didn't like how Logan was reacting to Kaylan, she was making him act kinda crazy. Other than I really love this fic.

I like it! I really think you should continue. This is a very good story and Kaylan seems like a very interesting OC. Please continue!