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zeldafreak
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
come on, keep going!
malinker
2008-09-15 . chapter 3
pls keep going
i like this story
Dragoon740
2008-09-05 . chapter 2
Please, Please do not give up on this story. It is really good and I really want to find out what you have planned for this story. So Please, PLEASE continue with this story.
Dragoon740
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
excellent story. Hope you update soon.
dark dragon 00
2008-01-14 . chapter 5
Not bad think I'll read more.
tahitiliz
2007-12-20 . chapter 5
Glad to see another chapter. Interesting back story for Link in the "new" universe and how he left the forest.. Maybe we'll see what he's up to in the next chapter?
quwira
2007-12-20 . chapter 5
yo! this is a kick ass story. i cant read the last chapter now, coz its past midnight, but i'll put it on alert and read it wen its...properly morning. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
Kathryn
2007-10-08 . chapter 4
Wow. It's really too bad that you don't get around to updating this very often. Interesting idea for a story.
LinkIsaacANDLloyd
2007-07-23 . chapter 4
Just a random fact that popped into my head while reading the part where you described the master sword's sheath:

A sword would not really have a metal sheath, and so the little metal against metal scraping that you hear in movies and such when a sword is drawn is purely theatrical. That's because the metal of the sheath would dull the blade. Of course, if there's some kind of inner lining I suppose it could be metal, but otherwise they'd just be leather or something of that nature.

Well, just a random fact. Maybe you knew it, maybe you didn't. I don't follow that fact myself though, so I'm not entirely sure why I brought it up...hmm. Well, I love the story so far and I hope you update soon. And I noticed you started it back in 04! An older styled Malink fic. I like the sound of that.
karma gypsy
2007-07-23 . chapter 4
Just as I finished the third chapter, my first thought was "awe, that's it?"

I really enjoyed this story and thought it was well written. You did a beautiful job with the characters. Please update when you get the chance!!

kg
KoalaKiller
2005-12-06 . chapter 3
G'day,

Just thoguth I'll give your Zelda story 2 paws up for a great start, and hope you continue writing.

Being a Malon fan, I was quite glad I came by this story as its rare to come by well-written fanfics where Malon plays a main role.

I'm also a Malink fan of course, and like the way you have written Malon's character so far, and with the others I don't really have any complaints and look forward to see how you write Ruto :).

Anyways, hopefully we don't ahve to wait too long for the next chapter but if so, I'm a patient Aussie.

~KoalaKiller
Liz0888
2005-11-09 . chapter 3
Yay, it's back! Thanks for posting, interesting chapter.
Crystal Cat-Chan
2005-11-06 . chapter 3
OO< very nice Dixxy. I liked the reactions in this chapter, most noteably: Malkon's break down and Navi's startlment over the ring. Both are incredabily realisitc and enjoyable. The fact that Malon may be able to use the sword only sweatenbs the deal. Do you think Link will know she has it if he manages to pick it up? It will be intresting to watch her learn how to use a sword and I'm very excited to find out what happens. You write Zelda very intrestingly, very soft spoken and calm. And Impa is wonderfully sacastic. See you later
Linksworstnightmare
2005-03-20 . chapter 2
Write more. Write more. Write more. Write more. Good story need to write more. Yes write more. I'll be watching and waiting.
Bridget
2004-10-14 . chapter 2
I had almost forgotten about this fic. I'm so glad you updated. It looks good so far and I hope more developes in the next chapter.

Bridget

p.s. About the slash thing- I didn't mean to jump to that conclusion but I had glanced at your other stories and saw slash. So, you'll have to excuse me getting excited.
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