I liked this chapter but something that's bugging me (and you have 23 chapters so I'll understand if you can't fix it)Mysterio's real name is Quentin Beck not Quinton Beck. However I'm just happy to find a story with Mysterio in it!
Keep Writing
S.S.G.

LE gasp doc ock speacking normal english venecular immpossible bravo

w00t!! I finally got around to reading it! Really great chappy, can't wait to read more!

oh god, im laughing soo hard right now. lady kayoss is perfectly welcome to otto, but it'll be a while before i'm done with him :D
i just cant say how much i sympathize with poor otto right now. speaking from experience having things stabbed into your flesh really bites. but i aint worried, death by letter opener seems a bit pedestrian for the mighty dr octopus. and i was completely blindsided by stephanie jumpin into the sack with the scorpion. i really thought she would prolly just murder some ex that'd done her wrong...course i could just be channeling my own little evil voice on that one.
i'm running outta ways to say great chapter...howz about i send along the cheese with a big bow on it that says "this story is smokin hot"?
the sock will be sent upon recipt of a live, restrained otto and that wonderfull magic whoopie potion.

Scorpion seriously wouldn't have been my first choice. I'd have chosen a man who was tall, dark, and tentacled had I been Stephanie. Electro would've been my second choice. Oh, and um... You can't leave us hanging like this! On with the next chapter!

It looks like Otto is going to turn into a right little ** for now on, man is his ** up or what, but great story anyway, i loved the torture seen, poor Otto, poor Babie *cry on anasadder's shoulder*

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LMAO deal! just lemme kno what kinda cheese and what size socks! seriously tho, you torture your otto in this chapter almost as much as i plan on torturing mine. (swear i'll update as soon as my muses return from the dead!) hm, i hate to sound evil (no i dont), but kill fisk and otto gets his life back? i'm not seein mucha a problem with that. course i'm not the sanest person on the planet... keep the great fiction comming girl!

Octopus torture! Evil! Funny, I'm, like, a sadist of fiction (I'd feel excited if it wasn't real), but it'll kill me if it actually happened, y'know? And, I'm sure you had fun indeed!

I *love* that picture... It really is creepy. Nice usage of a similar situation. Poor Otto... Excellent chapter! Oh, and when Phoenix Sheriden is done with the tied Otto and mutating chemical, can I have both?

Wonderfuel writing as all ways,

..Wait, I didn't review?! Damn...

Good chappie, m'friend! I need to start remembering to press that stupid button!

The recap was rather helpful, thanks. Poor Stephanie; I knew the price she was going to have to pay wouldn't be a good one, but to feed of pain, death, or sex? Not many people are going to be willing to hang around her. And I can't wait to see the confrontation between Otto and Ana; immortal supernatural violent women would make nasty opponents.

oh dear. nothing ever goes to plan for otto does it? poor bugger

yet another kick ** chapter :) have a cookie *gives anacsadder a cookie*

that was just an evil, evil cliffhanger. and i loved it! the dialogue made me laugh myself silly, screw mad tv, i'm readin this for laughs from now on. hm, sexual energy then? if i beg you real good will you send me some a that funky mutating chemical along with tied-up otto? plese, i have such evil thoughts a brewin.

keep up the great work or i'll send my army of mutant geese to eat your soul! :)