Reviews for To Be A Malfoy

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ladytiya 2008-05-02 ch 20, anon.	abuseplease try to finish the story.
STEPHiE 2007-10-24 ch 20, anon.	abuseI love this story and I really really wanna read the last chapter. Please post it please...
Polkadot-Sunstar 2007-08-07 ch 20,	abuseAh, there's only one chapter left to this story and it's been a few years, I hope you post it soon! This story is great, good job, update if you get the chance! -Sunstar =D
Potter's Wifey 2007-01-10 ch 20,	abuseI absolutely love it.
hunt4me 2006-09-01 ch 20,	abuseaw...that was a really cute story. I really liked reading it (I even stayed up extra early to finish reading it until now...it's like, 3.15 am) I do hope that you'll end up finishing the last chappie... :P I look forward to when you do.
mirageangel 2006-06-21 ch 6,	abuseOne negative thing among many in this story is the lack of reality and feeling. For example, the part where Draco was raped was so unemotional, the reader is completely under the impression that both Draco's parents spontaneously waved it off. They are so unacring; one thing you as an author must take notice of is that it is their child, threrefore this should come as a much more emotional and shocking incident to them. 'Although I suppose if he didn’t step in it would have been Karliya who was hurt…why would they hurt my children like that though?'seems as if he is qustioning himself who took Draco's broom or other meaningless possesion instead of virginity. Overall, the story has potential, but is in need of serious work. This review is not meant to be offensive in any way, only contributive. Mirage.
yaeko 2006-05-27 ch 20,	abuseheey! where's the end of the story? u.u its great, but whats next?
livinia 2006-02-14 ch 18, anon.	abuseI like Lucius in this chapter- brooding and troubled and vulnerable (Guess I'm kind of a FFangstaholic). Though he doesn't really seem like the GR! Lucius we knew, I like him, and I love seeing a healthy relationship between two men from supposedly opposite sides of the war. Also, congrats on making Karliya actually human and not some sort of young Mary Sue, and your assimilation of Harry into Draco- I really enjoyed that even if it wasn't canon. Who knows what Draco could have been, if he'd had a second father like James? You still have issues with run-ons though. Your reader, Livi
Livinia 2006-02-13 ch 8, anon.	abusehey, so I've been really enjoying your fic- it's a great "what if," and you do it justice. There's just one thing though. You have an issue with run-on sentences. lot of the time you put a comma where a semicolon or a conjunction should go, and me being the anal retentive grammar freak that I am, it damages your credibility. Maybe you need a grammar beta? I don't mean to offend, but I hate to see a fic so well-done be marred by imperfect grammar. Yours truly, Livi
Mandara 2006-01-23 ch 20,	abuseIf there is truly one more chapter left why haven't you updated it? It's been 8 months since your last update. Pleas update because this is truly a great story and I think it needs to be finish.
All Play No Work 2005-12-28 ch 2,	abuseNice. Good story you got the characters worked out. You get a thumbs up for that, I mean I always find it tough. Jack.
Seventh Bell Astarael 2005-12-21 ch 20,	abuseArt thou gonna updateth? -grins- Please do so.
sweetteetwo 2005-12-18 ch 20,	abuseplease up date real soon because I would like to find out about the twins if they are boy's are girls are one of each.
Bonnie Mizuhara 2005-12-11 ch 14,	abuseI have a fleeting image of a HP version of the Odyseus story where Lucius is Odyseus, James is Penelope, Draco is their son (forgot his name) and Voldemort and his death eaters are those bastards who tried to woe Penelope. I wonder if that would ever happen? It would be interesting to see Draco doing the defending when he's older. That would be so cool!!
Bonnie Mizuhara 2005-12-07 ch 20,	abusePlease continue!! PLEASE!! THIS IS SO GOOD! Is there going to be a sequel? Because I can't imagine only one more chapter to be an end to this!! Is what's-his -face coming back?

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