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| Gosling 2006-05-21 ch 1,  | abuseI thought the story was completely out of character, and that there is proof that Harry did not just sit there with blank eyes. He was in a rage at the end of the fifth book, he was crying. Anyway, another point is that Nymphie never had a brother. Look for it in the early chapters of the fifth book, it says on the Black Famil Tapestry. Tata! |
| BlueLupine 2004-08-19 ch 1, | abuseQueen Weasel, you have a gift. Marvelous and true -- it rings true. It'll be one hell of a hangover, but I think he's found a new purpose. Would like to see one between Harry and Lupin -- of course, Aunt Petunia suspecting what he is. Try it. :) |
| oneandonlysusan 2004-08-12 ch 1, | abuseI liked it a lot, especially your description of the rain. Great job. I love Remus, he's my favorite character. |
| Ydnas5 2004-08-11 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written! Though very sad. The flow was magnificent, and the desciptivness... Peace:D |
| Arihdni 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abusethe most saddest and beautiful thing that I ever read, keep writing |
| Lonelygirlem 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abuseit was so sad i got half way through it and i started crying. i felt for Remus and for Harry. one whos drinking his sorrows away and one that does not talk or eat. there state of depression is so deep. like i said i was almost through it and i started to cry. im crying as i write this review. i think that you should keep going with this story i would like to read more of it. |
| p3charmed 2004-08-10 ch 1, | abusewow that was really good. i almost started crying, but luckily i stopped myself. well done i really liked this! i don't even have any constructive criticism to give you! only that you should definitely write more Harry Potter fics. Please do. well done again! |