i liked this story alot i dont think it had to much OOC at all i liked it

I loved it...although yes, it was a bit OOC...but that's kool! Yay! I love RoyxRiza...yes...!!

Yuffie Paine (Aurum Potestas Est)

mew, too short~! i luv your fic! riza x roy banzai~!

no! liked it! alot! (no offence, i think i like this one than memory of the kiss