Hello! Some rec'd this story to me on the livejournal in response to a request I'd posted for some help finding some AU versions of the NJO series. I find this to be a very intriguing beginning to what could be a truly original and epic story, and I'm wondering if you're planning on continuing the story (and hoping that you will!).

A bit of a dark story in some ways, but from what I understand most of NJO was like that. Did you give up finishing this story because it seems like such a shame if you did.

I thought Jaina was going dark-side in the first chapter, but then she got captured. Now I am not sure where you were planning to go with her after that. Anyway hopefully you will get some inspiration or maybe a plot bunny will bite and you'll just have to continue this again. :)

Hi I'm a new reader! Great story so far and please update soon!

A very good story, and a nice idea to work off of. Keep this going, I'd like to see more.

Sweet. Definitely sweet J/TK.

This is really good, i love the plot so far, keep up the good work!

I love it when TK acts like herself in NJO! Wonderful J/TK!

Any chances of J/TK? I hope you make Jacen consort.

i really like this story...i hope you make a good confrontation with Jaina and family.. that will be the best part...looking forward to more!

awesome job! i really really am getting into this story! im really intrested in seeing where u take it with jag!

Hey...where's the rest of the story? This is promising!

i'm hoping that jaina and jag hook up...

I was hoping for some J/TK and J/J. I was kinda surprised with Vergere's role. Well, I'd like to see what's next.

All I have to say is this: Write more! This was great I can't wait to see what happens! good Luck and keep up the good work!

All the Best

orgaba46

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