Isn't Brass a sweetheart? i loved this dark story...

wow, this is so powerfull! The writing is fantastic! it's like one's experiencing everything at the same time! Thank you for writing this fic!

I have always thought that Grissom had a sbling who had died at a young age and I am so glad that you were the first one I have read who have also thought that AWSOME

I really like your writting... consider making this a longer story, its really enjoyable!

Hey, great story! Interesting, well written; I like the way you explained Grissom's behaviour when he works the cases with kids. Good job!

Terrific fic. I liked the Grissom backstory as to why he reacts that way with that type of case.
Enjoyed his bonding with Sara.

This is the first story I have read of yours and I really enjoyed it. I'm not a writer so I have no constructive criticism. I'll just say "good job" and I look forward to more of your stories.