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Reviews for: A Monkery of the System
Silver Ash
2009-10-25 . chapter 1
Great idea and well written. I think that you really got Hawkeye's character and I liked how he changed over time. I was surprised by the end and pretty mad, which just shows how well you had brought me into the story. Keep writing!
Joanna Hepler
2006-03-11 . chapter 1
Hahaha. I like it very much.
Captain Evermind
2006-01-14 . chapter 1
Heehee... Cute! Lol! So very like them! Jaajaa! Awesome li'l story! Thanks.
josh rand
2005-04-11 . chapter 1
Oh man I cannot stop laughing this story is so good I give it 5 stars. hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaPlease do more of these storys.
Ebdena
2005-01-27 . chapter 1
Great story, radar's my ultra fav character, and you worded his thoughts just right. congrats
Sleep_deprievd_alien
2004-09-29 . chapter 1
ROTF! You are a genius! Now I wonder where I can get a Gorilla suit and some superglue!
XxSparkyxX
2004-08-17 . chapter 1
Hee hee! Good job! I like the fact that it's in Radar's point of view-and it sounds like him. Everyone's in character, it's hilarious, and you did great with the dialogue. I can't ask for more!;}
~Jillian
JMA
2004-08-13 . chapter 1
oh, that was fantastic! You write Radar perfectly. This was a brilliant story.
Kitty
2004-08-12 . chapter 1
I could totally picture this happening. Poor Frank, first he gets trapped in a crate and now this! And the angrier people get in this story, the more Hawkeye and Trapper make jokes. That's exactly how they were on the show. Keep up the good work.
MicroChips
2004-08-12 . chapter 1
LOL this is funny. Good job with the ICness. Loved it!
Colemeezer
2004-08-12 . chapter 1
Loved your story! It's nice to see those gorilla suits haven't gone to waste. Good characterizations and dialogue, especially Henry & Radar at the end. I look forward to more.
white Stranger
2004-08-11 . chapter 1
Oh that was so funny. I can't stop laughing. You are good. Please write another.
Hawkeye's Martini
2004-08-11 . chapter 1
LOL! That was funny. I like your title, too. This was a good idea that turned into a worthwhile fic.
Trivette Lover Heather
2004-08-11 . chapter 1
hahahaahhahahahahahahaa
THIS WAS GReat!! Just great!
I loved it.

that was so vintage season 1-3... I envy it, really I do.

I could see it all playing out, each line, each action. Luved! ... Did I say I loved it.

Gave me quite the laugh, would love to see more from you.
Take care
Hahaha
The importance of being in uniform at all times... classic... :)
Intelligent Witch
2004-08-10 . chapter 1
thats a nice little fic its cute and funny and made my day

~Emily
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