Great sequel, exciting plot twists, sorry that I did not review your first story, but I absolutely loved this one!

The dark mewtwo approves, finally finished this story. Lost a computer, lost my mind now I'm trying to get caught up. Lots of twists and turns here. Ares death could have used some form of funeral though in my opinion. Wonder what happened to the body.

Awsome story! Supacool! There's just one part I don't like. Mewtwo is ! *sob* But oh well, all things die at some time, even in stories. once again, I love your stories! Keep up the great work!

It's certainly been a while since I've read this story, but now I've finally been able to read it again. Good job, man. A good story is one that you can vividly imagine, and there are parts in here that apint a good picture. The last chunck you put it here seemed rushed, though; quite a few spelling errors, and spontaneous occurences. Then again, in my own writing, I've found that the hardest parts of a story is the begining and the end. A job well done!

Oh, yay! A sequel! I just finished COTP (it was AMAZING) and now I must read this. Hee hee hee..

whoho... man this story is incredible !
But let's all bow our heads in respect to salut the depart of our good friend mewtwo.
may his spirit forever live in our hearts and may it find peace in the next world.
btw I like it you used the name Ashley , (it the name I am gonna give to my future daughter) and where did you get the name Tanis ? lemme guess : a character ( half-elven) from the Dragonlance books ?
anyway really love this fic.
bye

analyse of story : complete
analyse of 1st chapter : complete
final diagnosis : awesome, man.
haha... LOL this sounds like another really great story dude.
Ares is a good name but why this ? Ares is the son of Zeus and god of savage war , or bloodlust, or slaughter.
anyway I'm back :)

Odairu: *is absolutely speechless*
Orion: Oh, I loved it! Absolutely LOVED it!

To sum it all up in one word: WOW. An AWESOME culmination to an AWESOME story, couldn't stop reading for a second. Before I go on, let me tell you one thing: There is only ONE book that has had me so overawed that I could barely breathe at times, and only ONE book that has ever made me cry multiple times throughout the story. Until now. I cried during this story SO many times, it's insane. This is one of the most evocative and captivating chunks I've ever read, a BRILLIANT way to round off the story. You, my friend, should be up in the same museums as Hubbard, Stephen King, and John Saul. Yes, yes, I know, overused compliment, but it's true! And this story here just proves it even more.
General praise aside, time to get to the more specific parts:
That part where Shakara was manipulating everyone to get her way was downright awesome. I haven't been on such a huge diplomatic roller coaster since Battlefield Earth and Starcraft.
Closer to the end of the main chunk, where everyone was teaming up against Ares, was PERFECTLY choreographed. I could literally see that entire thing play out in my head, and what a breath-taking battle it was. Having Jenna rise above the rest of the clamor and melee with her Summon gave me the shivers, with how wonderfully it was executed.
I would write more - and believe me, there is still a TON of stuff in here worth mentioning and deserving of praise - but this review is getting a bit long, and I don't want to kill your eyesight X3

My, how you've fallen. It was a physical chore for me to get through this chunk, what with the amazingly high density of amazingly cheesy team mentalities, poor dialouge, thin details of battles, and an overall air of juvenile inability to write well. Comparing this to Crossing of the Paths and the early chapters of Legacies, I honestly wonder if it was written by the same person. It just seems to me that you've lost your drive to write this with any degree of quality.
I'd advise against writing another sequel.

Ooh! i love the story! it was just like reading an actuall book. There are few fanfictions that make me feel like that. your story was fabulous. im not very good at the constructive criticism thing, but ooh well. i loved the story. Please contine writing! i will be waiting eagerly and anxiously.

Hi, it's me again. Sorry it took so long to review, I had stuff to do with school. Anyways, a spectacular story with a great end. The story had almost everything in it, though it did get confusing with all the crossovers. It's always good to see an action packed adventure ending with such happyness... and so many children... a lot of kids. O.o

At any rate, nice job. If Tanis had a rave club or something, he'll be all set. :) I'll be waiting for your future works, keep up the good work.

Ah...lapsing into cheesiness again. Just try to keep your descriptions of the sapce stuff more literary and less Star Trekkish. Try to think of them like you would a naval or aerila battle and I guarantee it'll sound a lot better.

AHH! Cliffie! NO! *falls to ground twitching*

Excellent! Mind control, villain-like... villainy, and rage! This just keeps getting better... how long was it since there was a story like this?

Anyhow, it's good so far. Though it does get a bit confusing with all these different characters and all. The cliffhanger is a good touch, I want to know what happens next.

Keep up the good work work, sorry for the late reply.