Well written story and insight. If you write anymore, I'll definately read.

Lovely!
I've always admired the strange Itsuki and Haruka relationship (preferring it WAY better to Makoto and Haruka) because I think Itsuki kinda deserves Haruka for all that he's done for her...
I love what you did and the deep insights into Itsuki's relationship with Haruka. RahXephon is really an abstract anime, but I guess you've got a good grasp of what's going on :)
Excellent!

This is beautifully written...not too many Rah Xephon fics out there, so I'm very surprised to see this one is about Itsuki. I love that character, so I am biased a little bit.

I like how you kept Itsuki's seemingly "accepting" attitude...very good study of the character.

Wow, this is the only other RahXephon fanfic I've seen (the other one beign mine) and it isn't nearly so good as yours, woah. o.o You got Itsuki's charecter down to the "t" I think. I kinda feel sorry for him