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Charlie Winchester
2008-01-29 . chapter 6
Oh, PLEASE finish! Or write more! I just may die. I've been reading a bunch of your fics today, and they're all so freaking fantastic! You write amazingly well.

-Charlie
Dangrassi
2006-04-25 . chapter 6
I kind of have a crush on you.

...

LOL!

Wow. Just, wow. How DO you write like that? Honestly, even after the bloody show ended you're still able to weave an incredible chapter, basically out of thin air. I love your writing and you!! Yay Trily!

Oh, and BTW, our two year anniversary of being best cyber buddies is coming up. HOW INSANE IS THAT!1!! It's kind of scary, even. And I felt like telling you this in a review, since that's how it all started. :)

Hearts and stuff,

Dani
RadioFRGuy
2006-04-22 . chapter 1
New chapter, wohoo!! Very cool Tina!
NotAContrivance
2006-04-21 . chapter 6
Great chapter! The back-handed insults were brilliant, first of all. I liked how Robbie tried to stay out of their problems and then left. And Lily... I really liked her in this chapter. She has such a wide range of emotion. One second she's this strong person hitting Ray, and then the next she's a vulnerable girl admitting that she hasn't got it all figured out. Is it weird that I'm glad Lily broke Ray's nose? Though is it really that safe leaving Travis and Ray alone together? Anyways, I can't wait to see what happens next!

Lol, who hasn't been listening to Alexz obsessively? "There's Us" is so... bittersweet. And the piano part's beautiful. I never related it to Travis and Lily before, but it fits really well. Especially when you think about their brief attempt at dating, and the fact that they share the music thing (an artist and her producer...hmm). I love that song...

Update sooner this time, though, okay? I love this story. Great job, great work, great author. And, man, I miss RFR.
Boaz Priestly
2006-04-20 . chapter 6
You can't stop again. I make it a point to never push writers because they owe the readers nothing, but, I am begging ok? This made me squee with joy as I felt maudlin inside at the same time. You're killing slowly here!
DustNWind
2006-04-20 . chapter 6
You don't know how big a smile I had when I saw this new chapter in my inbox. It has been a while since you've released anything and well I can't blame ya...I don't see much with my name on it either LOL.

I will now have to surrender the fact that I too, have listend to Alexz almost obsessively this week as well and that I recognized the songs lyrics you posted within a second's glance without having to think much about it. I am beginning to think I need a new hobby LOL

It's a weird feeling to go back and read RFR stuff like this now just because it seems like so long ago, but I still appreciate it none the less.
RFRAngel92
2006-04-20 . chapter 6
Wonderful chapter. It was wonderfully written! But, we want more!
Roguester
2006-04-20 . chapter 6
FRICK YEAH! Trily fo' LIFE!

I know this sounds weird, but my favorite part of this chapter is "DuHUDE!" OMG, I almost split a gut laughing. It's *SO* Ray! Of course, you got a drizzle of my reactions from the beta'ed Microsoft Word document. LOL! A was a ball of "oh-no-he-didnt's!"

And OMG, I'm obsessed with Instant Star. Listening to the soundtrack makes me all mushy. I'm still bitter about RFR's cancellation, though. Ugh.

But anyways, YAY for Haiku Drivel! Your fans have waited so long for this! How long 'til the next chapter, eh?
Acer
2006-04-16 . chapter 3
NIce this story rocks!
Aurora Mikayla
2006-01-09 . chapter 5
Love it. Love all your stories in fact, but this one is excellent with the tension between ray and Travis. Travis has to win of course, but it's funny to read about. Ray's a bit of a putz isn't he? Anyway, hope you update soon.
Danni Evans
2005-12-18 . chapter 4
oh yeah, and I forgot to mention that I really like Lily's self-defense thing. "action lily." That's great! And her and Travis' sparring match. Priceless!
Danni Evans
2005-12-18 . chapter 5
wow! i'm really enjoying the story so far...love the characters, they haven't changed (nice job!) and great ending of the chapter! I like the tension between Ray and Travis. And yes, I do really miss the show.
Keep writing!
~danni
RFanR
2005-12-18 . chapter 2
Kinda short, but still nice... I especially liked the beginnings when Travis predicts Ray's behaviour.
And the end was funny.
Now of to the next!

Btw, if you're interested, you might wanna check out my RFR fic. It'd be great to hear the opinion of someone as talented as you.
RFanR
2005-12-16 . chapter 1
This look promising. And you can count on me to read (and review) the rest of the chapters when I'll find a bit more time.
I just hope you'll do TravisxParker, coz I love that pair.
ROCK ON!
paceyjoeytruelove
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
hi just thought i'd say you're doing a great job keep up the good work
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