Very sweet story! The characterizations were very well done. Thanks for writing!

So cute! ^__^ I just love how earnest Kuwabara is. He tries so hard, you can't help but love the big lug.

You have a real gift for banter, you know that? Many are the times in this story where I've found myself restraining giggles to avoid waking my roommate. ^_^

Aw..this was really sweet. I enjoyed everyone teasing Hiei at the end--he deserves it!

Oh god, I thought you were serious with the kurama karasu bit for second. I was about to have a heart attack. Anyway, love the story so far, I just have two qualms, in chapter two Kuwabara knows about the whole forbidden child thing, how? Also, in another chapter Hiei socks Kurama, well, I think Kurama could have dodged in time. Love the story so far, can't wait to read the rest.

This really was a great chapter. I belive this is a turning point for Kazuma and Yukina, it was very well written. Though I am surprized to hear Hiei say what he has said though. Excellent spelling and detail. Thank you.

Ruto Kuntai

Well written chapter. Excellent description of the poems, a nice job all around. Your spelling was excellent and error free, and the detail you've put into this story is impressive. Great job, it really is well written.

Thank you for the great work,

Ruto Kuntai

Poor Kazuma, does the guy ever get a break? Great chapter, excellent spelling, detail and description.

Thank you,

Ruto Kuntai

Signifcantly better detail and description in this chapter, well done. However there were a few punction mistakes, but only one or two. Nothing major, though we've all done it some time or another.

Great chapter, I really liked it.

Ruto Kuntai

Well this was a nice story, I like how you wrote the description and it was interesting to read, but when Kazuma learned Yukina was Hiei's brother, it sounded like she was talking in third person.

However, this was fine work. Excellent spelling.

Thank you,

Ruto Kuntai

Aww! Kuwabara/Yukina is the sweetest ship in all of the YYH fandom. There aren't enough stories made for them!

I loved your story! From Kurama's matchmaking skill, to Hiei's overprotective role. Kuwabara and Yukina were awesome!

Heh. I too suffer from Kurama/Karasu syndrome (I was hoping you'd fit it in but I suppose Karasu and fluff just don't go hand in hand)

Anyways, BRILLIANT FIC.

PERFECT! You should write a sequel! It was adorable!

QUOTE: “I’m supposed to just stand by passively while my twin sister walks away with someone who wants to screw her senseless?”

LMAO! That was classic!

I was wrong. Hiei didn't ruin their date. And Kuwa's making excellent progress. I also like the role that Kurama plays as Cupid. I figured if anyone would approve of their relationship it would be him. Although judging from the Anime, Hiei didn't really mind considering he knew of Kuwabara's feelings for his sister. He just enjoys baiting him.

Another satisfying chapter. This one was full of fluff, but that's okay. At least now Yukina's getting an idea of what love is about.

Is Kurama sure that Romeo and Juliet is a good play for them to see?

And why do I get the feeling that Hiei's going to mess this up again?

This chapter made me laugh so HARD! Poor Kuwa...sufferning because he has feelings for Yukina! I wanted to scold Hiei as he went on their date. But the ending was surprising when he told Yukina that she'll have to find out what love is for herself.