Love it! :)

Wow! Amazing story, absolutely amazing. The dynamic at the beginning (well, the shown one) was incredibly fascinating to me- the idea of being captive like that, at the same time being at your captor's mercy in that way, with that dynamic, and knowing you are, in a sense, fortunate... I know that things turned out to be different from quite that, but that was still incredible in several ways, thought provoking and not-thought provoking. And of course the 'twist' was amazing, very interesting and VERY well done, exploring the psychology, following the changes in thought and feeling and all through. For that matter, you are amazing at the psychology thing throughout. And the way you gave us, piece by piece, a picture of the other things in this AU was also great, and the last chapter was a very right addition, and very fitting, and very- well, the point is, I liked it. So, great story and thanks!

Intriguing idea, and original as far as I know. I disagree with the characterization, but this story is very well written and you explain Hermione’s choices and feelings well. The revelation in chapter 5 makes it a lot more believable. Nice work making this story bearable despite the subject matter.

that was very well done.

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Very interesting concept for a story. Thanks!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

omg, that was like...awsome, i mean that was so great, i couldn't stop reading it and its like four thirty-five in the morning. i'm so totally blown away by this story and the twists it in. love the dark hermione, and how they are together at the end. you are a great writer and i love your work. thank you so much for writing this story and posting it.

-KC

Excellent writing. The interaction between the two characters is brilliant, the dialogue is spot on. You can really get inside their heads and that's what I love most about writers. I loved your A/N: '...her dirty little secret.' That it is.

Wow, I like this twist. I can tell this story will be interesting and will pull me in, it has already. You write well and this chapter is perfect in length. Enough to explain and enough to have us wanting more. Well done, can't wait to read the rest.

Oh. My. God. I am speechless... that has to be the best fucking Hermione/Severus pairing I have ever read.

-peace and love

Oh I loved the dark start but how it ended nicely. I wasn't expecting the beginning to be a spell though, but I'm always up for twists in stories. This is very good and well written, it's in depth and ended beautifully. In short, this is one of the best stories I've ever read.

I loved it, very erotic, all the pieces fit together neatly and you expertly toed the line between R and NC-17.

kiss kiss

Annie

Ek! Great ending to a great fic and a great job you did writing it too! I'm reading "You know what they say" right now and it's wonderful too. I envy you so much, you have an amazing amount of talent!

)_( 0_0 )_( Blink. Wowz. That was unexpected.