I would really love to see more of this. Gos is such an underused character and I am enjoying how he is changing the people around him and evolving at the same time.

Thanks for the read.

I'm adding this to my story alerts and favorites, even if you never continue it. It's just way too interesting not to do so. The only mistake I saw was the Tati/Tatawaki thing when it's supposed to be Tatewaki.

This is your best story by far, and I see you're still writing.

I can only pray you'll one day return to it.

really creative story is the place they landed a crossover? cool either way.

Considering how long it's been since you made this I take it you're not planning on continuing. Pity, for there are so few Gosunkugi centric fics around and this was a pleasure to read. Nice work!

Damn that change its spots fast, first a NWC fic now a sword and sorcory?

Great read though, cant wait to see what happens next!

Thanks for Sharing.

This is good. Will you ever continue it? I hope so. I think I favor the Shampoo/Ranma for this one. And the calm Ryoga/Kasumi would be nice.

wow...

This was actually a really good story.

Too bad it lies unfinished, but I must say it was quite entertaining.

In the stories where Hikaru learns to use his skills and doesn't end up being devoured by a demon within the first couple paragraphs, he tends to make a most impressive causal nexus... Not quite as impressive as Ranma or Nodoka, but still impressive.

(As for Genma & Soun harvest of gore... impressive if somewhat disturbing. Perhaps it was for the best that they are lazy, and not the "Evil overlord" type.)

Could use more proofreading, but still an excellent work. I hope you decide that there will be more.

Well, considering that it's been almost two years since you posted this chapter, it probably wouldn't be going out on a limb to guess that there won't be a second...still, we can all hope, right?

You've got a great start here, and I hope to see it continued.

Most Excellent! Most Excellent indeed! You don't get enough credit for you works as it is (I've seen the lack luster reviews in the Star Trek sectionss) and having found this chapter once agian I can't help but pour on the praise.

I do hope you continue this story soon though I wounldn't mind if you choose to continue Chaos Factor first.

Cute, but wrong.

Honestly? Focus less on sex and more on action. Unless you want to write a _good_ lemon.

Please write more, this is great, just continue this!

GODDAMIT! whats with writing a great firstchapters and then seemingly abandoning them! Come on, write more!

As another reviewer mentioned in a different story of yours, you always seem to pick really annoying places to leave off with a story. Still worth the read though, and I do hope you continue these fragments of yours sometime.