Wow, that's really deep and sad. You did a great job.

Very good poemfic!

Dang!! Excellent but sad! You out did yourself. You really expressed what Spock must have thought and felt. We can be glad that it turned out okay in the end. Whew!

Oh, I just came across this. Very well done to convey so much in so few words.

That was only slightly depressing...but with a victorious ending, as we all know. Good job!

Filled with both longing for home and the bleak reality of distance and duty. Nice!

Whoa.

So heavy. So angsty. So sad. *sniff*

Good job. I'll go away & cry now.